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Dead..
Your not going to live for much longer Death holds you close Do not leap from the comfort Your End will come either way With a will or not The pains The scars The breating The speaking It will stop Leap not from the comfort of Deaths arms He welcomes you when it seems about your time.. |
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i will embrace it......at that time
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I actually find this comforting, somehow
 
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I actually find this comforting, somehow
As did I
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Death's Comfort may have been a better title then
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(((DT))) This is amazing!
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Bonjour ^^
Thanx It seems some find a comfort with this write... Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way... |
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Dead.. Your not going to live for much longer Death holds you close Do not leap from the comfort Your End will come either way With a will or not The pains The scars The breating The speaking It will stop Leap not from the comfort of Deaths arms He welcomes you when it seems about your time.. |
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Like Life?
How so? |
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Bonjour ^^ Thanx It seems some find a comfort with this write... Its kind of funny..I was kind of going for the other way... I know you were, but those of us reading bring our own experiences of death that color how we interpret what you wrote. 
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Ive read it over
And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all.... |
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Ive read it over And Now I see where a sense of comfort can come from Maybe my real intentions were not what I thought at all.... This often happens when writing- it does to me anyway... always processing |
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good one
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THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes...
A lighter veiw? or maybe just a simpler one? |
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Very good write
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THis one seems to have goten much more attention then my other writes... A lighter veiw? or maybe just a simpler one? people tend to comment on what they can relate to-we are all going to experience death.
I like all your writing- it may be the timing of when things are posted, you never know. I recently posted something with no comments, don't think too much into it.
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I cant help myself sometimes ^^"
I think to much on things...at least thats what Im told... |
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