Topic: im not good at writing poems, help write one 4 me | |
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that sounds better than the original.
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im not good, but ill take a wack at it, what do i got to loose, lol The one, my world Jayla we play in the morning, we play before the zzz's A piece I always missed, the piece you made complete The spot you filled, the spot I left blank for a beautiful little girl like you. Alot of memories from your first 2 years. Best of all having you lay next to me in the morning's to watch your "Bob Bob" Memories I'll cherish Memories I'll never forget Your the one that made me Your the one that keeps me modivated Our times together will never end Rain or sun shine, we'll play through them all again and again Just remember daddy will always be yours' and you will always BE MINE! how is that, i dont feel im that good at writing them, lol. fix anything that may sound out of place or need fixed to sound better. what you all think Ty you can't go wrong with that!! Your heart shines through and the love you feel for this beautiful little gift is felt by all! She will love this! |
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