Topic: Ember
kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 09:41 AM

a most awesome description of true emotion, infatuation and out and out desire that any woman would wish to hear from her man. Very impressive kcflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers


thank you (p)...very kind of you say

flowers flowers

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 09:45 AM

drinker Heres to the man who can speak from his soul.
May it always stay filled with your warmth so full.

drinker Nice write man.



thank you iam...

drinker

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 09:48 AM

WoW!!! is a mild understatement,,,
Your Soul shines as the brush flows upon your canvas,, such purity and true emotion filling these pages,,
Beautiful, Breathtaking, Kinda leaves you with that Awwwwwwwwwwww all over
feeling :heart: flowers







no, i think WOW!!! says quite a bit
thank you so much

:heart: you

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 10:06 AM






most people probably didn’t notice

but, i did

the way her hair outlines
her face
the way it brushes so lightly across her cheek
when she turns

it’s a prelude to the tenderness of her soul
a glimpse into a delicate world where
she is known
and i am but, a stranger
a loyal subject from afar
never to presume
her interest
or favor
i am caught between
distance and reserve,
recognition and an invisible fire
that burns in me
with great promise

oh yes, they see her pretty
but, fail to see
her
not me no,
i see her
and i feel her
down to the marrow

i felt time stop
when she entered the room
it delivered to me a moment
of clarity
i shall not soon forget

she is
a princess
and would be queen
and i am not
of her caste

the animation
in those eyes
the way her dimples and
tiny laugh lines
frame that
most beautiful
most imperfect smile

imperfect for the entire world to see
though so few do

no one noticed
the way our eye’s met
like flint to stone
a spark
settling on
my soul

smoldering

being kept
alive
by the
sweet memory
of the
breeze of her
passing

that she should
come to me
in the latest of night
and lay
with me the kindling
of love
we roar with
a heat of
passion

i have never know

and i pledge
my lips
silent
by the light of day
yet with each
new dusk

not knowing
boundaries
of fence or field
a single ember
floats
to loves
call

untouched


kc08



Beautiful. How many women would yearn to be seen this way? Gorgeous. :heart:



all women are seen this way by somone...

thank you very much :heart:




Darlin' if ALL women were seen this way by someone, we wouldnt be here would we? But this is certainly the way to rejuvunate hope that some day we WILL be seen by someone this way :heart:


you may have a point but, you have to know also that as men we are taught not to express our selves like this (it's not very manly)so even if you are thought of this way you may never be told...strange, the one thing women want so much of we (men) are looked down upon for doing...


You're absolutely right and it's unfortunate. Personally a man who CAN express himself is the one I would rather be spending time with far more than spending time with Mr. Macho. A masculine body and outlooks is a joy obviously, but it's only amplified and enhanced by an open spirit and heart.



ah, what a complicated live we live. hard to find the balance sometimes. maybe it is time that women take the lead in this department i know all women say they want romance but, we have never been told it is ok or shown how to give it. so wouldn't it be fair to suggest women who want romance in their lives "teach" their men how to provide what they need? it is little things that can make a big difference so why don't women make the candle lit dinners instead of wishing he would do it. we can be taught and what is so wrong with being responsible for your own feelings?

no photo
Sat 11/01/08 10:11 AM







most people probably didn’t notice

but, i did

the way her hair outlines
her face
the way it brushes so lightly across her cheek
when she turns

it’s a prelude to the tenderness of her soul
a glimpse into a delicate world where
she is known
and i am but, a stranger
a loyal subject from afar
never to presume
her interest
or favor
i am caught between
distance and reserve,
recognition and an invisible fire
that burns in me
with great promise

oh yes, they see her pretty
but, fail to see
her
not me no,
i see her
and i feel her
down to the marrow

i felt time stop
when she entered the room
it delivered to me a moment
of clarity
i shall not soon forget

she is
a princess
and would be queen
and i am not
of her caste

the animation
in those eyes
the way her dimples and
tiny laugh lines
frame that
most beautiful
most imperfect smile

imperfect for the entire world to see
though so few do

no one noticed
the way our eye’s met
like flint to stone
a spark
settling on
my soul

smoldering

being kept
alive
by the
sweet memory
of the
breeze of her
passing

that she should
come to me
in the latest of night
and lay
with me the kindling
of love
we roar with
a heat of
passion

i have never know

and i pledge
my lips
silent
by the light of day
yet with each
new dusk

not knowing
boundaries
of fence or field
a single ember
floats
to loves
call

untouched


kc08



Beautiful. How many women would yearn to be seen this way? Gorgeous. :heart:



all women are seen this way by somone...

thank you very much :heart:




Darlin' if ALL women were seen this way by someone, we wouldnt be here would we? But this is certainly the way to rejuvunate hope that some day we WILL be seen by someone this way :heart:


you may have a point but, you have to know also that as men we are taught not to express our selves like this (it's not very manly)so even if you are thought of this way you may never be told...strange, the one thing women want so much of we (men) are looked down upon for doing...


You're absolutely right and it's unfortunate. Personally a man who CAN express himself is the one I would rather be spending time with far more than spending time with Mr. Macho. A masculine body and outlooks is a joy obviously, but it's only amplified and enhanced by an open spirit and heart.



ah, what a complicated live we live. hard to find the balance sometimes. maybe it is time that women take the lead in this department i know all women say they want romance but, we have never been told it is ok or shown how to give it. so wouldn't it be fair to suggest women who want romance in their lives "teach" their men how to provide what they need? it is little things that can make a big difference so why don't women make the candle lit dinners instead of wishing he would do it. we can be taught and what is so wrong with being responsible for your own feelings?


I agree. I think it's quite easy "showing" men what we would like. But it all comes back to environment versus genetics. Too many men (and women for that matter) are raised in an environment that is geared towards locking up feelings. For a woman such as myself who runs on emotion, that's very difficult. When a person is actually raised that way, it's very difficult to modify their thinking. And that's a guaranteed set up for relationship failure, sad as it may be ....

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 10:25 AM








most people probably didn’t notice

but, i did

the way her hair outlines
her face
the way it brushes so lightly across her cheek
when she turns

it’s a prelude to the tenderness of her soul
a glimpse into a delicate world where
she is known
and i am but, a stranger
a loyal subject from afar
never to presume
her interest
or favor
i am caught between
distance and reserve,
recognition and an invisible fire
that burns in me
with great promise

oh yes, they see her pretty
but, fail to see
her
not me no,
i see her
and i feel her
down to the marrow

i felt time stop
when she entered the room
it delivered to me a moment
of clarity
i shall not soon forget

she is
a princess
and would be queen
and i am not
of her caste

the animation
in those eyes
the way her dimples and
tiny laugh lines
frame that
most beautiful
most imperfect smile

imperfect for the entire world to see
though so few do

no one noticed
the way our eye’s met
like flint to stone
a spark
settling on
my soul

smoldering

being kept
alive
by the
sweet memory
of the
breeze of her
passing

that she should
come to me
in the latest of night
and lay
with me the kindling
of love
we roar with
a heat of
passion

i have never know

and i pledge
my lips
silent
by the light of day
yet with each
new dusk

not knowing
boundaries
of fence or field
a single ember
floats
to loves
call

untouched


kc08



Beautiful. How many women would yearn to be seen this way? Gorgeous. :heart:



all women are seen this way by somone...

thank you very much :heart:




Darlin' if ALL women were seen this way by someone, we wouldnt be here would we? But this is certainly the way to rejuvunate hope that some day we WILL be seen by someone this way :heart:


you may have a point but, you have to know also that as men we are taught not to express our selves like this (it's not very manly)so even if you are thought of this way you may never be told...strange, the one thing women want so much of we (men) are looked down upon for doing...


You're absolutely right and it's unfortunate. Personally a man who CAN express himself is the one I would rather be spending time with far more than spending time with Mr. Macho. A masculine body and outlooks is a joy obviously, but it's only amplified and enhanced by an open spirit and heart.



ah, what a complicated live we live. hard to find the balance sometimes. maybe it is time that women take the lead in this department i know all women say they want romance but, we have never been told it is ok or shown how to give it. so wouldn't it be fair to suggest women who want romance in their lives "teach" their men how to provide what they need? it is little things that can make a big difference so why don't women make the candle lit dinners instead of wishing he would do it. we can be taught and what is so wrong with being responsible for your own feelings?


I agree. I think it's quite easy "showing" men what we would like. But it all comes back to environment versus genetics. Too many men (and women for that matter) are raised in an environment that is geared towards locking up feelings. For a woman such as myself who runs on emotion, that's very difficult. When a person is actually raised that way, it's very difficult to modify their thinking. And that's a guaranteed set up for relationship failure, sad as it may be ....



yes you are right. so, understanding this maybe we should all be a little more selective and truly search for the right fit instead of grabbing for the instant gratification and hoping by some cosmic intervention that mr. or miss. almost right might 180 and slip into the mold...

LAMom's photo
Sat 11/01/08 12:51 PM


WoW!!! is a mild understatement,,,
Your Soul shines as the brush flows upon your canvas,, such purity and true emotion filling these pages,,
Beautiful, Breathtaking, Kinda leaves you with that Awwwwwwwwwwww all over
feeling :heart: flowers







<<-----thinks that there is going to be one very lucky woman in KC's future flowers





<< -------- Me thinks this lady is basking in the ever growing soul of
an incredible friendshipflowers

kc0003's photo
Sat 11/01/08 08:02 PM



WoW!!! is a mild understatement,,,
Your Soul shines as the brush flows upon your canvas,, such purity and true emotion filling these pages,,
Beautiful, Breathtaking, Kinda leaves you with that Awwwwwwwwwwww all over
feeling :heart: flowers







<<-----thinks that there is going to be one very lucky woman in KC's future flowers





<< -------- Me thinks this lady is basking in the ever growing soul of
an incredible friendshipflowers



true frienships are incredible flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

no photo
Sun 11/02/08 01:12 AM
This is just so good kev

You don't even know

Stef

kc0003's photo
Sun 11/02/08 02:54 PM

This is just so good kev

You don't even know

Stef



thanks again stef...

i don't know?... huh

no photo
Sun 11/02/08 08:47 PM


This is just so good kev

You don't even know

Stef



thanks again stef...

i don't know?... huh



No I don't think you do and that is what makes you so great.

D and I miss hanging out with you.

S

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/03/08 08:19 PM



This is just so good kev

You don't even know

Stef



thanks again stef...

i don't know?... huh



No I don't think you do and that is what makes you so great.

D and I miss hanging out with you.

S



ok now you have me confused...tell david i will call him in the morning

flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Tue 11/04/08 04:17 AM
I'M CAPTURED, caught up in this, all I can do is wish, and wish!:heart: smooched bigsmile

AngelLight's photo
Tue 11/04/08 04:44 AM
Beautiful (((K)))....beautiful and eloquent....when you have something to say, you have something to say! flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Tue 11/04/08 04:52 AM
EXCELLENT!
I hope you have shared this poem with HER...would not be right to keep it from her. She is one lucky woman!flowers :heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/04/08 10:28 AM

I'M CAPTURED, caught up in this, all I can do is wish, and wish!:heart: smooched bigsmile




Thanks Ali

Now I must go check the rest of my traps...lol

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/04/08 10:31 AM

Beautiful (((K)))....beautiful and eloquent....when you have something to say, you have something to say! flowerforyou :heart:



Angel, I guess every once in a while I do get it right.

Thank you


kc0003's photo
Tue 11/04/08 10:33 AM

EXCELLENT!
I hope you have shared this poem with HER...would not be right to keep it from her. She is one lucky woman!flowers :heart:



Thank you for taking the time to respond

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 11/04/08 10:41 AM


EXCELLENT!
I hope you have shared this poem with HER...would not be right to keep it from her. She is one lucky woman!flowers :heart:



Thank you for taking the time to respond
Hmmmmm, most intriguing........................

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/04/08 10:54 AM
Intriguing huh?