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Edited by
Mschelle86
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Fri 10/31/08 05:37 PM
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(I wrote this peom when I was 18...what do u think?)
Between my hips you taste my lips and mark your kiss As kisses meet I taste your tongue You taste my tongue I taste my lips Your touch has got me creaming in a total bliss Sixty-nine ways to have your way with me Take out your toys and play with me Tasty I taste me as I lick your fingers of my cream My plans are not to tease I only want to please And I heard that you like candy Well, I taste sweet Once you taste my body the flavor will leave you addicted I'll twerk in your face as you lick it You got me on you like you're ecstacy And I think Im about to O.D. Now, dont get me wrong In the end I just want you to hold me But right now make love to me Lick me from head to toe and do it nice and slow Though me let your love flow As you taste my rainbow. |
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wow, they allow that in schools?
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lol i didnt write while I was in school. I wrote when i was 18 thats what i mean
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I'll twerk in your face as you lick it...what does twerk mean???
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twerk means to rotate basically
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oh ok...kinky
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..wow..if you wrote this at age only age 18..i can only imagine (lustfully) what the updated version is..= )
roco if its been a while..and you need your memory refreshed..let me know..i'll work with you on it = ).. |
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"through me let your love flow"...i really like that part...i wonder if i can say that to a girl..i think it will only work if a girl says it to a guy..
roco |
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(I wrote this peom when I was 18...what do u think?) Between my hips you taste my lips and mark your kiss As kisses meet I taste your tongue You taste my tongue I taste my lips Your touch has got me creaming in a total bliss Sixty-nine ways to have your way with me Take out your toys and play with me Tasty I taste me as I lick your fingers of my cream My plans are not to tease I only want to please And I heard that you like candy Well, I taste sweet Once you taste my body the flavor will leave you addicted I'll twerk in your face as you lick it You got me on you like you're ecstacy And I think Im about to O.D. Now, dont get me wrong In the end I just want you to hold me But right now make love to me Lick me from head to toe and do it nice and slow Though me let your love flow As you taste my rainbow. I like this. Clearly as an 18 year old, you hadn't learned the art of sensual subtlety, but you've got the right concept here. I dont know how old you are now, but I bet if you rewrote it, you'd pack it with a lot more subtlety which can be far more powerful than the in your face writing you've presented here. Irregardless, this is pretty damn good. Really. |
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whoa!!!!
caught me off guard.... nice work though... 
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