Topic: Senseless love
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Wed 10/29/08 04:40 PM
Senseless love

Under the wings of angels my heart cries.
Trying to move forward in the mist of a backwards world.
Emotions as blue as a clear summer sky.
The past holds hands with the present an slow dances with life.

Senseless love a strawberry field of romance.

Silver roses reflect ambiguous day dreams.
In the mist of each heartbeat a memory falls from grace.
Time stands in denial while trying to defend it's involvement with the present.
Champagne kisses whispering gently my way, but her heart never looks my way.

Senseless love a strawberry field of romance.

Paper moon personality sets my mind ablaze upon a evening sky.
A glass spider web set a drift upon destiny.
Careless whispers echoing across these footprints upon my heart.
Time becomes a prisoner of love held captive by the potential of a new day within a Senseless love.





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Wed 10/29/08 04:44 PM
Edited by MisKim323 on Wed 10/29/08 04:55 PM
WOW!!!! WOW!!!!!flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers I attempted to email you and thank you for sharing this awesome write with us......amazing....simply amazing

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Wed 10/29/08 06:33 PM
Very nice Up2Us. I like the feeling of the write.drinker

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Wed 10/29/08 07:59 PM
Thanks...smokin This is one of those poems that writes itself.

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Fri 10/31/08 11:27 PM
"The past holds hands with the present an slow dances with life. "

Nice poemdrinker

I showed some of your poems to a few co-workers. One of the ladies began to cry after reading one of your poems. You have a true talent. She may contact you soon.

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Sat 11/01/08 05:15 PM
Thanks..glasses Not sure if making someone cry is a good thing.:tongue: Still...emotions are the portrait of our soul.flowerforyou