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If you were a house,
What kind of room would you be? That excluded one closed door unmade bed scattered sheets and pencils that almost started that letter, or maybe that cluttered one books tossed about you never finished - couldn’t read because you didn’t like the ending. In any case, it isn’t public it’s the faucet dripping unchecked, pooling and irritating, and when wet I walk away breathless. |
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amazing as usual
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wow!!!
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Yaaaa Wow Indeed
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Edited by
s1owhand
on
Wed 10/29/08 09:14 AM
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the florida room
a profusion of sprouting humidity scent of the floral shop glass ceiling warm in the winter glowing with light alive with green and oxygen a small table with white linen tye dyed napkins warm crepes butter, sugar, yogurt, sour cream fresh fruit twinkling eyes laughter |
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I'd be a room with soft cushions on the floor................ Very good poem
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