Topic: "An efficient inebriant"
Californication's photo
Mon 10/20/08 10:51 PM

Eyes red and read over.
Pierced by investigative glances,
Covered with a settling fatigue.
The smell of smoke, liquor, and vomit.
Dizzy from the spinning,
spiraling outward and downward.
Lost all concept of time.
Am I dead?
Maybe this is what dying feels like.
My hands are soggy,
I just want to lay down,
Maybe die.
If they're right, I should wake up in heaven.
I wonder if I'll still have a hangover.

PacificStar48's photo
Mon 10/20/08 11:11 PM
Very good and very true. A keeper. Give this student and A!

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Tue 10/21/08 06:41 AM
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