Topic: Rare Ever It Be
d4tc's photo
Tue 10/07/08 03:40 PM
I looked for a river

found a pond

Around the pond
I moved along

stepping over
an ocean

I moved a long

or just a wave

I'm not quite shore

Peddling
Puddling
running
no more

Unshore weather

they could use a splash

the ocean gives up
on it's path
when it's finger tips tap
the sands
that are shore
they are shore
darkening
merging
hardening
fine
pebbles
coarse
as many are
and will be
smelling the waves
it's like perfume
for the showerless
hourglass shapes
a star
fish bait
makes good bait
for fish
but these waters
can storm up
in a Hurry
as if a few drinks can
make my words blurry
a few more, I
surf this ocean
I once stepped over

looking for the river
I
I never found

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Tue 10/07/08 03:41 PM
Wow.....flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 10/07/08 03:41 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh sweet one its there.. in time you shall see,, flowers

jimz's photo
Tue 10/07/08 03:42 PM
cool

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Tue 10/07/08 03:48 PM
I really enjoy your poems.

d4tc's photo
Tue 10/07/08 04:37 PM
Thank You
OneMoreTime flowerforyou
jimz drinker
LAMom flowerforyou
Ms. Kim flowerforyou

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Tue 10/07/08 05:18 PM
Awesomedrinker drinker

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Tue 10/07/08 05:18 PM
waving

im a little tired today driving all along the river