I'm new to this and would appreciate a critique.

Thanks,

Paul
Login name: ISAYHELLO

You say Goodbye and I say Hello, Hello Hello....


And stand up straight so I can use my X-ray vision to get a full appreciation






Welcome

your very pretty miss

It would be nice to know what your interests are in a blog.

If your objective is to find dates, your profile seems kinda slim on info. The pictures are good and interesting.

I know it's kinda hard to come up with a lot of material to put in a social site profile sometimes, but that's where a list can be handy. Make a list of things that you like in word processing and once you have it all figured out, then copy/paste it into your profile instead of sitting and trying to figure out what to type, and type it all into a text box.

An example would be a couple of headings: Favorite foods, favorite music. Then take awhile to come up with some things under those headings, type them out, spell check them if you don't trust your writing skills, and then c/p it into your profile. TA DAAAAHHH!

Nice to meet ya. :)

Dad


IM telling mom,

Welcome! Always good to see a fellow Alabamian on here... we seem to be few and far between!

I see no flaws except maybe that you appear to be lazy by not putting any effort into the "essay" about yourself and want the girl to do the effort of thinking of good questions to ask you.


Whatcha think?

Nice pictures and you started off ok but then kind of run it off in the ditch telling the woman to do all the work writing questions. It is not rocket science to figure out what we want to know. You already have outline notes in your heading. Write a sentence or two about each of those and you would be home free. Welcome aboard. Jump in the forums and put your two cents in.