I am doing a page in my daughters high school year book and I wrote this to put on the page and I would like some feed back as to if I should change anything:

To My Beautiful Daughter

then its her name

I have watched you go from a beautiful baby into a beuatiful young lady. That has a heart of gold for everyone.

As you embark on your next phase in life, I want you to look back on your school years with fond memories, and to remember all of the good times that you had with your friends, as well as all of the trials of growing up.

My wish for you is to make all of your dreams come true. You have made me the proudest Mom in the world, I could not have asked for a better daughter than you.

Congratulations on your high school graduation.

Love always
Mom

I wouldn`t change a thing,..perfect

Thank you, I just hope that she likes it.

sounds perfect

twenty years from now it'll put a tear in her eye

Ok now you made me cry, remember when my daughter graduated

Thank you

Im sorry I didnt mean to make you cry.

I think the worse part is when they graduate, I cried like a baby!

You realize that the little girl that you use to bathe and brush their hair is all grown up and leaving to start their own life. You are scared and excited for them at the same time.

I know exactly what you are talking about, I am not looking forward to May 21, 2009 at all.

You did fine "Mom"! Good job.

Perfect

Thank you

Thank you

Thank you

actually it's "That'll do pig,..."

but I didn't want you to think I was calling you a pig haha

(but I always dug Babe)

That is very nice, obviously heartfelt, and something very sincere and wonderful that she will look back on and remember. The only thing I saw was tha beautiful was spelled wrong. This might just be because of fast fingers... I know the same thing happens to me sometimes when I am typing. Just thought I would throw it out there.

I didnt think that you were, I remember where that quote came from. I love that movie also.

its very nicely done

Thank you so much