Topic: Her Electronic Touch
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Wed 03/28/07 07:18 PM
Her Electric Touch
I remember the electricity
when our hands first touched
the newness
the excitement
the taste of the forbidden.

It was a breaking of tension
the end of a game
and the beginning of so much more

As our lips touched
tasting each other
first softly
then firmly
then openly
we watched our inhibitions float away
turning unthinkable thoughts
into heavenly deeds
as our willpower collapsed
in the wind a quivering breath

But as we fade from mortal souls
and slip into a torrent of passion and desire
let's not fool ourselves about forever
nor pretend this is something grand

Let's be in love for one night
so we can watch it fade
when the morning comes

Let's live a lifetime
in these moonlight hours
and never look back in the dawn

Because we both have lives to lead
and our own trails to blaze
and even though tonight we burn for each other
our fire will smolder and die
under the weight of the morning dew

And then we can spend the rest of our lives
forgetting about this night
the night we gave in to an electric touch
and caressed away our deepest desires

tabs's photo
Wed 03/28/07 07:20 PM
Wow!
This is amazing.
Keep writing
-tabitha

ChrisIlarraza's photo
Wed 03/28/07 07:25 PM
yeah, not bad

LAMom's photo
Wed 03/28/07 07:45 PM
WoW !!!!!