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celtic_kitten Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 9957	Sun 09/28/08 09:15 PM
and I see you in the moments when my life is so chaotic as everything spins out of control just a moment in the morning before everything starts going when there is peace and just a smile I can get past the lies that others have told and ever their cruelty or indifference to get to a place where it is just us a discovery that you are all I want and I can be me when I am with you yet we are both so much more than this

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sun 09/28/08 09:20 PM
very nice.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 09/28/08 09:28 PM
"i like that"

celtic_kitten Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 9957	Mon 09/29/08 06:10 AM
thanks guys

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 09/29/08 06:49 AM
"a discovery that you are all I want and I can be me when I am with you yet we are both so much more than this" Very beautiful!

feralcatlady Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 35491	Mon 09/29/08 07:10 AM
Lisa that was so beautiful and so true.....thanks for the share doll.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 09/29/08 07:43 AM
Excellent Celtic......Epiphany.

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Mon 09/29/08 08:09 AM
I like it.....very nice thank you for sharing........

celtic_kitten Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 9957	Mon 09/29/08 10:10 AM
thank you very much for your kind words everyone

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