My 16 year old friend wrote this for a contest page at myspace that
needed a "love poem" by the end of the day with "old words". LOL A very
broad field for the poor kid and I thought I'd share.

As moonlight hits thee in the dark,
For thee my heart does leap,
I realize that on my heart you've left your mark,
Thine beauty is more than skin deep,
The perfect match for my imperfect heart,
Somehow I know Heaven would be in your arms,
O' without even trying you had me from the start,
These words today are not simply charms,
For though you may never feel the same,
Tis all just my way of saying I love you
Forever, for even if you reject me,
Simply knowing you is worth the pain.

I know she's no Shakespeare but I liked it

awww, it's sweet :)

It's really lovely.
I like it.
No Shakesphere-- it has it's own style.

Really sweet ((Songb)))

Aw thanks guys I love her to death, so it's hard not to be
biased

Songbird honey, that is one of the best I have read in ages. Personally
i dont like shakespeare as much as I like the dabbler cause the dabbler
puts more feeling into it.

It's really good.

thats a very sweet poem....

Yeah It's pretty good congratulations

I liked it too SB, Give her my gratitude when you talk next.

they had a contest on myspace?
was I sleeping?
nice poem.