Reflection Upon The Water

I love the reflection in the water
But I don't like what I see,
The beauty that reflects
That surrounds the vision of me.
The soft billowy clouds drifting
Upon the light blue sky,
With the suns golden beam
As the glint catches my eye.

It's the vision upon the water
That's taking me in awe,
The beauty that surrounds me
As I see all the faux.
It's like looking in a mirror
But the water shows the pain,
As the clouds up above me
Gather in darness to rain.

As the pellets come down
The vision gets distorted,
Nothing that I saw
Would be as I reported.
The rippling effect dissimulated
The history I had seen,
As I stand to take in the air
The rain washes my spirit clean.

Aw... that was very nice WOlfie! Good write.

Thank you Mysti...glad you liked it.

How nice. Very good.

Thank you Tazzy...it's good to see you again.

nice way to start the day

Thank you May....glad you liked it.

Wow, this one pleasantly surprised me. Yes, I know why and no, it's not up for discussion. Nicely done, R, very nicely done - look forward to more!

wonderful Robert, great irony of what we want to see and what's actually there

Beautiful Robert....and then the Rainbow appears...

She obviously knows you very well "Robert"----very nice poem----how someone can see the beauty that surrounds themselves yet when they see their own reflection they don't like what they see, the pain and suffering, the storm as in the story on your profile actually.....Sweet & Sassy is absolutely correct......."....and then the Rainbow appears..."........and the wolf finds his sprite and a new sprite comes to be the keeper of the Rainbow so the two can be off to their new life together..............
It flows so beautifully and perfectly Sassy...........Your insight is awe - inspiring -
Robert - this could ostensibly be incorporated into your story - it could be your "happily ever after" - the "replacement" sprite for the one who found her love.....
Kudos to both of you!!!

Thank you ladies...that was very sweet of ya'll with the comments.

L...what's not up for discussion? And how did it surprise you?

Thanks Pam...glad you liked it.

Cat...the rainbow does shine on...

And Michele...thanks as well...it could be the ending of the story and you're right.

nicely done robert

Robert...

Very nice as usual...

Thanks Kev and Jo...I'm glad you liked it.

How it surprised me or why is not up for discussion. You actually know why, you're just not ready to hear it yet. Think about your reactions to some of my comments and why they cause that reaction. Then we can arrange that chat in email we agreed to.