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Topic: my love
d4tc's photo
Tue 09/16/08 11:43 PM
you understand me
I see
you need to be
comforted
loved
and I know someone

he is
without question
the answer to the
problem

or is he?
let's see

you I wanting running
deep within the meadows
of my cornfield
made of concrete
where stealth/alike taggers spray
cans of paint



their love is art



my love is art
my love is this
right here
these
words
I
am
ty
pe
ing
I
know you
are like me
I know you
feel
the
same
way
with a heart
that craves more
than the lonely it's used too


say what you will


the cards have been dealt
the deck was shuffled
twice
and a third time
by my request
and I'm sitting on a pool table
juggling the solid balls
because I'm feeling solid
only I know the gym misses me
so the only thing solid at this point
is a clothesline
outside
where the rain
is washing my clothes
again
and all I can do
is wait for the sun
for the sun
is worth a wait
hung on a clothesline
I lay
drying
motionless
letting the sun
shine on me
so I can see the light
I take off my shades
and someone elses shades
and we both
see the light
we stare
as
in a contest
I feel played
this guy has practiced
he has an eye patch
and I usually don't do this
but I did it
and now I don't know what to do
because I wanted to see the light
but my pupils
where did they go
I can't see myself
without
you

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Tue 09/16/08 11:49 PM

you understand me
I see
you need to be
comforted
loved
and I know someone

he is
without question
the answer to the
problem

or is he?
let's see

you I wanting running
deep within the meadows
of my cornfield
made of concrete
where stealth/alike taggers spray
cans of paint



their love is art



my love is art
my love is this
right here
these
words
I
am
ty
pe
ing
I
know you
are like me
I know you
feel
the
same
way
with a heart
that craves more
than the lonely it's used too


say what you will


the cards have been dealt
the deck was shuffled
twice
and a third time
by my request
and I'm sitting on a pool table
juggling the solid balls
because I'm feeling solid
only I know the gym misses me
so the only thing solid at this point
is a clothesline
outside
where the rain
is washing my clothes
again
and all I can do
is wait for the sun
for the sun
is worth a wait
hung on a clothesline
I lay
drying
motionless
letting the sun
shine on me
so I can see the light
I take off my shades
and someone elses shades
and we both
see the light
we stare
as
in a contest
I feel played
this guy has practiced
he has an eye patch
and I usually don't do this
but I did it
and now I don't know what to do
because I wanted to see the light
but my pupils
where did they go
I can't see myself
without
you
Ya BLA BLA BLA ............**** LOVE JUST bunch of users out there!

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Tue 09/16/08 11:51 PM
i mean f*** love!

PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 09/16/08 11:54 PM
actually I think you should give experience to this pupil missing woman happy beautiful drinks

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Tue 09/16/08 11:57 PM

actually I think you should give experience to this pupil missing woman happy beautiful drinks
WELL I WOULD ONLY I'M NOT SURE WHO's MISSING?

no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:05 AM

i mean f*** love!


this is not the time or place for varmint!

good lord woman

haven't you already spread your drama in another forum somewhere

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:10 AM


i mean f*** love!


this is not the time or place for varmint!

good lord woman

haven't you already spread your drama in another forum somewhere
BITE ME B****!

no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:16 AM



i mean f*** love!


this is not the time or place for varmint!

good lord woman

haven't you already spread your drama in another forum somewhere
BITE ME B****!


no thank you. i will inform you your response is out of custom in the poetry forum.

d4tc's photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:16 AM
Thank you PM drinker
and ak0 :heart:

no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:20 AM

Thank you PM drinker
and ak0 :heart:


can we get back to makin artbigsmile

i want lots a paint:heart:

d4tc's photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:29 AM
Are you sure?

I take threats
seriously

Some people just
don't get it

and I got it

the paint
with the flavors

tasting colors
I don't paint colors
that are not edible
and eat flavors I cannot
paint

my friends hook up asked me tonight
what I considered freaky

You will just have to see

I didn't tell her that

no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:39 AM
like i've said sacred is beautiful, no?

dare i to mention on mingle2laugh

d4tc's photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:46 AM
never mind
the big head
will captivate you longer
surprised

the smaller head

not too smart
slaphead



Hahaha!
:angel:

no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:57 AM
surelybigsmile



bastet126's photo
Wed 09/17/08 05:11 AM

you understand me
I see
you need to be
comforted
loved
and I know someone

he is
without question
the answer to the
problem

or is he?
let's see

you I wanting running
deep within the meadows
of my cornfield
made of concrete
where stealth/alike taggers spray
cans of paint



their love is art



my love is art
my love is this
right here
these
words
I
am
ty
pe
ing
I
know you
are like me
I know you
feel
the
same
way
with a heart
that craves more
than the lonely it's used too


say what you will


the cards have been dealt
the deck was shuffled
twice
and a third time
by my request
and I'm sitting on a pool table
juggling the solid balls
because I'm feeling solid
only I know the gym misses me
so the only thing solid at this point
is a clothesline
outside
where the rain
is washing my clothes
again
and all I can do
is wait for the sun
for the sun
is worth a wait
hung on a clothesline
I lay
drying
motionless
letting the sun
shine on me
so I can see the light
I take off my shades
and someone elses shades
and we both
see the light
we stare
as
in a contest
I feel played
this guy has practiced
he has an eye patch
and I usually don't do this
but I did it
and now I don't know what to do
because I wanted to see the light
but my pupils
where did they go
I can't see myself
without
you


love is art in its most beautiful form ~ a way special write! flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 09/17/08 09:14 AM
Nice write, Jason flowerforyou :heart:

flame1cutie's photo
Wed 09/17/08 10:20 AM
Very good write Jasonflowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 09/17/08 10:40 AM
"my love is art
my love is this
right here
these
words
I
am
ty
pe
ing
I
know you
are like me
I know you
feel
the
same
way
with a heart
that craves more
than the lonely it's used too"




Sweet J, that is so beautiful....I love it! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

d4tc's photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:01 PM
TY!:banana:
Bastet bigsmile
Kat bigsmile
cutie bigsmile
Angel bigsmile

thinking of today and how I love today:


Today is one day
not twoday

If today
was twoday
than twoday
should be plural


no photo
Wed 09/17/08 12:01 PM

"my love is art
my love is this
right here
these
words
I
am
ty
pe
ing
I
know you
are like me
I know you
feel
the
same
way
with a heart
that craves more
than the lonely it's used too"




Sweet J, that is so beautiful....I love it! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:



ditto to what Angel said

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