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Please look and tell me what you think. Do I need to change something in it?
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looks good... welcome to the site.
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two pictures are too far away,other than that,thats that
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Really nice profile- I enjoyed reading it- Maybe a couple more pics....I like it!
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Please look and tell me what you think. Do I need to change something in it? PERFECT. |
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Hiya =)
A few suggestions, if you don't mind - of course you don't you asked for it. ;) Paragraphs tend to be easier on the eyes. Try breaking up that giant single paragraph with the enter key a few times. Take a look at my profile to see how I laid it out. People on the internet are like voluntary A.D.D. victims. =) Space it out and it'll be an easier read. Your one close up picture is kinda grainy/pixelated and it's hard to see much of your features due to that. See if you have one that doesn't get all distorted when you upload it =) Farm girls and country girls are awesome, btw =) Welcome aboard the crazy train! |
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A bit wordy but the pics are great!
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