Topic: Miss you before you're gone
nightruler's photo
Sat 09/13/08 06:35 AM
Thought this flame would never die
now I don't know if I should laugh or cry
because we've been through so much
If saying goodbye and losing touch makes it better
then I won't try to stop you now
I won't ask if this could be a mistake somehow


because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone


It's torture just the little things
that brings me to my knees
I see the bed I can no longer lie in
as you sleep so peacefully
and you seem to carry on as if
we never did exsist
I just wonder if things would be different
if you had ever felt like this




because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone



I wish your emotions would convince you more
than I was the trouble in your life
I know sometimes we act without thinking
but that ain't such a crime



because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone








A friend got dumped,had to write about it



kim4love's photo
Sat 09/13/08 06:44 AM

Thought this flame would never die
now I don't know if I should laugh or cry
because we've been through so much
If saying goodbye and losing touch makes it better
then I won't try to stop you now
I won't ask if this could be a mistake somehow


because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone


It's torture just the little things
that brings me to my knees
I see the bed I can no longer lie in
as you sleep so peacefully
and you seem to carry on as if
we never did exsist
I just wonder if things would be different
if you had ever felt like this




because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone



I wish your emotions would convince you more
than I was the trouble in your life
I know sometimes we act without thinking
but that ain't such a crime



because it's all said in your eyes
how they swear these feelings are right
it's not like anything I say,could ever change your mind
after all that we've done wrong,
I should have told you all along
I miss you before you're gone








A friend got dumped,had to write about it




nightruler's photo
Sat 09/13/08 06:48 AM
I'm confused

no photo
Sat 09/13/08 06:52 AM
great write:smile:

nightruler's photo
Sat 09/13/08 06:55 AM
I appreciate that pkd!:wink:

May777's photo
Sat 09/13/08 07:18 AM
sad :cry:

hit a `old wound,..

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 09/13/08 07:25 AM
Very nice write for your friendflowerforyou