Topic: Blink
myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 09/12/08 12:32 AM
Even in the sickles of your
half-closed eyes there are
elements of riddles, questions
and answers unmatched.

This is not the mystery of
the drifting transparent dead.
This is not the mystery of the
tallest ladder’s rungs, those
who clutch their heads and speak
in tongues, taken over by the fire.
This is not the mystery of the
liar and the disappearing
assistant.

This is the question of the city
in the morning, the persistent
daily surprise that things go on.
Lights are lit, pistons pump.
That people button, buckle, leave
their shelter, eat. The first surprise
as tires move on streets, as feet
press pedals in a way that preserves
glass and metal. This is the uncanny
way people, planes, cars move in
their directions absent a single
guiding intention.

For a second I look away
and you’re asleep. Tomorrow
I’ll play at knowing motives,
say I may know what
you’re thinking. But I only
know you surface and sink,
that the hour for sleep comes
easily and you rise at dawn. I know this
like I know your blinking eyes –
every second always here and always gone.


kc0003's photo
Fri 09/12/08 12:39 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Fri 09/12/08 12:59 AM
this is an amazing write...you have great vision

very well done...

:thumbsup: flowers :wink:


s1owhand's photo
Fri 09/12/08 01:39 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Fri 09/12/08 01:41 AM
yes, i like the way you see the morning
and the glint within your smiling crescent lines

flowerforyou flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 09/12/08 10:50 AM
Thank you kc :flowerforyou & H flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 09/12/08 12:52 PM
WoW!!! flowers

jimz's photo
Fri 09/12/08 01:50 PM
nice!!

myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 09/12/08 05:44 PM
Thank you Mom flowerforyou & jimz flowerforyou