Topic: dreams
isaac_dede's photo
Wed 09/10/08 01:40 AM
In the middle of the night,
I wake to your caress
You smile sweetly As you
snuggle into my chest.

The warmth of your body
Cuddled closely to mine.
These feelings I know will
Last throughout all time.

You are the woman That I
have been searching for
Whom I love with all
My heart forevermore

Just seeing you smile
Fills my heart with glee
And I’m so glad you chose
To spend your life with me

You are so beautiful I think
As I try for a good morning kiss
But your body slowly fades
With the morning mist.

I guess you are not real
Or so it seems.
Do you really only
Exist in my dreams?

I refuse to believe that
This is the case
And my dreams I will
Continue to chase.

So that one day when I’m
awaken by the morning sun
I’ll be lying next to
My perfect one.

AngelLight's photo
Wed 09/10/08 02:15 AM
...yes, keep your dreams alive....they will come true flowerforyou

isaac_dede's photo
Wed 09/10/08 02:16 AM

...yes, keep your dreams alive....they will come true flowerforyou

thank youflowerforyou

isaac_dede's photo
Wed 09/10/08 04:55 PM
would it have been better without the last two verses? i had thought about cutting those out....just curious?

PoeticMaster's photo
Wed 09/10/08 04:59 PM

would it have been better without the last two verses? i had thought about cutting those out....just curious?


nice drinker

yes I agree the last 2 stanzas are un-neccessary