Topic: Legend
myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 09/09/08 11:23 AM
I cannot remember,
all these years since,
any of the words we used.
I cannot recall the substance, the starts, the subjects.
Only the feelings, brought back to life in me now
familiar as water
as my own skin
as blood.
I remember the clouds roiling around us,
you holding my hair back as
everything spun out of control.
And I wish I could rise up and see you
from a distance,
as small and insignificant as myself.
I would be above -
able to calm the fear.
Instead, you are Prometheus
unbound
mythical
and unattainable.
Instead, you rise over me
and quell the very fire
you put in me.


PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 09/09/08 11:26 AM
beautiful animal flowerforyou

Dangerous_Kitchen's photo
Tue 09/09/08 11:29 AM
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Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 09/09/08 11:33 AM
Well done!

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Tue 09/09/08 02:06 PM
excellent writing animalflowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 09/09/08 02:26 PM
inspired "the demon" bigsmile flowerforyou

http://mingle2.com/topic/show/161590?page=2

myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 09/09/08 04:26 PM
Thank you

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