Topic: Relief
myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:27 PM
The unspoken love
that I carried in my heart
pumped blood like lead through my veins.
In a moment of clarity
(sickening insanity)
I regurgitated every last blood cell.

Type A negative.

Pools of hemoglobin clotted
on the floor
and I felt faint at the sight
(anemic chain reaction).
I was suddenly a hundred pounds lighter
and floating above a
chalk-outline silhouette
that could only be my own.

So I stitched my wrists shut
with nothing left to bleed.
Right there on the ground was
all that’s left of me.


darkowl1's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:31 PM
:cry: sad :cry: butdrinker drinker

VladTheInhailer's photo
Sun 09/07/08 08:34 PM
you are macabre. i like it a lot...very emotive and slightly sarcastic...

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 09/07/08 11:17 PM
Thank you

V flowerforyou :wink:
Vlad flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 09/07/08 11:24 PM

The unspoken love
that I carried in my heart
pumped blood like lead through my veins.
In a moment of clarity
(sickening insanity)
I regurgitated every last blood cell.

Type A negative.

Pools of hemoglobin clotted
on the floor
and I felt faint at the sight
(anemic chain reaction).
I was suddenly a hundred pounds lighter
and floating above a
chalk-outline silhouette
that could only be my own.

So I stitched my wrists shut
with nothing left to bleed.
Right there on the ground was
all that’s left of me.


The color is red, but I'm not dead.
This rush all over my skin of heated sweet life.
Now damaged and hurt, feeling loves bitter strife.brokenheart

Nice read and keep them coming,wink.:heart:

kc0003's photo
Sun 09/07/08 11:33 PM
funny how we can be reduced to such basic particles given the right circumstances

nice write

LAMom's photo
Sun 09/07/08 11:49 PM
flowers

s1owhand's photo
Mon 09/08/08 12:16 AM
everywhere
all i see is
empty
floating
incorporeal
you

the lifeblood
all
spilt
out

drained
exhausted
renewed
free

flowerforyou flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 09/08/08 12:25 AM

everywhere
all i see is
empty
floating
incorporeal
you

the lifeblood
all
spilt
out

drained
exhausted
renewed
free

flowerforyou flowerforyou


Within the circle there is no curve
Only perspective
Within perfection there is not but change
The dimples in the sand
Where he walks in silence
Lead to my love
The same path leads to me

:smile:

And thank you (((iam flowerforyou, kc flowerforyou, Mom flowerforyou)))