Topic: Dark Room
tanyaann's photo
Sat 09/06/08 07:15 AM
I am in a dark room.
I am swinging my arms
as hard as I can,
but they don't make contact.
I am screaming past the
capacity of my lungs
but those screams are not heard.
I am crying to the point
where there are no tears
left in my body,
but those are not witnessed.
I am so angry that
part of me wishes I could manifest
all this negative energy
in a way that would effect you.
You would know what I am going through
despite having an unfeeling and uncaring
heart.


tanya 9-6-08

feralcatlady's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:19 AM
Oh sweetie profound is all I can speak right now.....wiping a tear from my already tear streaked face.

LAMom's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:29 AM
Love & Light flowers

tanyaann's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:37 AM

Love & Light flowers


flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:37 AM

Oh sweetie profound is all I can speak right now.....wiping a tear from my already tear streaked face.


flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 09/06/08 11:24 AM
so sorry Tanyaann, giving you a hug, I'm right there with youflowerforyou flowerforyou

usernamefayou's photo
Sat 09/06/08 11:31 AM
It's a nice write. Affect instead of effect I believe.

It's troubling to hear so many feelings of loathing and helplessness in so many writes. I'm going on complete disconnect with it all to where it really has little effect on me.

tanyaann's photo
Sat 09/06/08 02:18 PM

so sorry Tanyaann, giving you a hug, I'm right there with youflowerforyou flowerforyou


no worries this is only one drop of water in the pond flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Sat 09/06/08 02:19 PM

It's a nice write. Affect instead of effect I believe.

It's troubling to hear so many feelings of loathing and helplessness in so many writes. I'm going on complete disconnect with it all to where it really has little effect on me.


well don't let my writes affect you that much, they are usually much more dramatic than the situation or my actual feelings.

thanks for reading!

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:34 PM
Nice effect and visual. I liked this one. flowerforyou

tanyaann's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:50 PM

Nice effect and visual. I liked this one. flowerforyou


thank you!