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Topic: better?
southern_bee Joined Sun 07/29/07 Posts: 4812	Wed 09/03/08 07:38 PM
so im constantly trying to write a better profile i think im verging on the begining to get ocd because of it anyway,i rewrote it,feedback please? thanks

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Wed 09/03/08 07:42 PM
Looks good to me...Absolutely love the last pic

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 09/03/08 07:43 PM
so im constantly trying to write a better profile i think im verging on the begining to get ocd because of it anyway,i rewrote it,feedback please? thanks nice

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Wed 09/03/08 07:44 PM
You can't explain me, I can't explain me. It's a complicated nature we all fall short in because no one can explain you or me or her or him. But we try and we try and we're never satisfied with the answer.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 09/03/08 07:48 PM
You can't explain me, I can't explain me. It's a complicated nature we all fall short in because no one can explain you or me or her or him. But we try and we try and we're never satisfied with the answer.

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Wed 09/03/08 08:03 PM
You can't explain me, I can't explain me. It's a complicated nature we all fall short in because no one can explain you or me or her or him. But we try and we try and we're never satisfied with the answer.

DragonFlyTat Joined Fri 08/29/08 Posts: 3759	Thu 09/04/08 06:54 AM
Just being honest. You come across as harsh. You mention being blunt a lot and watch your spelling and grammar. Just because I'm in education and when guys write me they always comment on how well my thoughts are put together. Other than that you are good to go just tone down on the "mean" side of yourself and talk up the softer side that all women have.

GmcKen Joined Tue 04/29/08 Posts: 34	Thu 09/04/08 09:57 PM
Miss Bee I think that if you wouldnt spell it out so much...it might be a little better ...when I read it I feel like I am being scrutinized...smile some and have some fun with it...you can put what your looking for in your profile but be more round about...

Goofball73 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 33913	Fri 09/05/08 01:15 AM
I take it you are a blunt person right? Good read, and very specific with what you want.

southern_bee Joined Sun 07/29/07 Posts: 4812	Fri 09/05/08 07:34 AM
ok but is it not better to get straight to the point?

Goofball73 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 33913	Fri 09/05/08 08:44 AM
It is good to get straight to the point. But I feel you have to use "tact" when you do it. Some of the wording you used can be viewed as "harsh" and could turn some guys off from wanting to contact you. Then again, maybe those guys would have been wusses, so........

southern_bee Joined Sun 07/29/07 Posts: 4812	Fri 09/05/08 08:49 AM
hahha well im changing it again im sure youre soo surprised!hey if they dont have a backbone and cant make a move b.c they are scared,soo not my problem

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