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I would have given you everything
All you needed do was ask I'd have laid it all on the line All you needed do was draw I'd have done nothing All you needed do was something We danced around ourselves Tantalizing Hinting Lying We pretended we both knew Just what the other wanted Taking all for ourselves Leaving nothing but festering sore A sore we called Love I loved me You loved you We pretend we love Each other I would have given you everything All you needed do was ask I'd have laid it all on the line All you needed do was draw I'd have done nothing All you needed do was something The Lie we tell each other Neither of us would have done Anything |
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Tue 09/02/08 10:27 AM
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that's good ((ice))
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Spinning in circles with grins of delight!
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that's some good poetry right there..you go girl.
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Thank-you............you guys are so sweet..........
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That's very good.
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hey ice!!--nice reading
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Ice nice to see you home again,
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Thank-you............you guys are so sweet.......... Lies hurt, and words build,wink,,NICE WRITE and you rock-on!!!!! Keep um coming... |
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Nice write
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