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Topic: THE LITTLE BUG
luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Mon 09/01/08 10:09 AM
I looked at the little bug... he was dying...slowly. I couldnt save him... his injuries were far too great. All that I could do was to spare him from a long, slow, painful death. So I did. I placed my foot upon him, and swiftly... his little life was over. And far, far...in the back of my mind... I kind of wished, the little bug, was me.

johnboy072472 Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 4874	Mon 09/01/08 10:14 AM
Loved it...... As I do you.......

BobbyJ Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 1368	Mon 09/01/08 10:16 AM
Great write! Our thoughts of the smallest of things ofen reflect our behaviors toward much larger things. Now you need to put this to music!

Pete026 Joined Sun 10/14/07 Posts: 14799	Mon 09/01/08 10:20 AM
So sad BobbyJ, you're right. I can imagine how this'd sound, something in A minor (the key, not a child lol) hmm... ideas... picks up guitar...

ahuhalicious Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 995	Mon 09/01/08 10:24 AM
you will always be my little bug :D

jnbuglady Joined Sat 04/05/08 Posts: 865	Mon 09/01/08 10:25 AM
Wow the symbolizim,intense.

Plainome Joined Sat 08/30/08 Posts: 363	Mon 09/01/08 10:29 AM
sad.........

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 09/01/08 10:34 AM
nice

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Mon 09/01/08 10:41 AM
So sad BobbyJ, you're right. I can imagine how this'd sound, something in A minor (the key, not a child lol) hmm... ideas... picks up guitar... Ok how about..."Funeral for a bug"...sorry Sir Elton John.

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Mon 09/01/08 10:42 AM
Great write! Our thoughts of the smallest of things ofen reflect our behaviors toward much larger things. Now you need to put this to music! Only if you do the back up Bobby J.

BobbyJ Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 1368	Mon 09/01/08 07:15 PM
Great write! Our thoughts of the smallest of things ofen reflect our behaviors toward much larger things. Now you need to put this to music! Only if you do the back up Bobby J. I can hum!

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Mon 09/01/08 07:46 PM
i sometimes dream in euthanasia

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Tue 09/02/08 12:22 PM
i sometimes dream in euthanasia I know...I think I saw you there.

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