Topic: Strake
myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 08/31/08 10:15 AM
Because you
came here dressed as a man,
in a shirt.

Because things keep slipping.
Shifting distinctions.
Hiding your desire for
alike.

Left adrift
you venture your throat
to a word that tightens
around the sounds you might
produce.

You surrender to your own story,
told. Moth like
hands wide, slow
flapping,
in and
out.

An imprint held.
Curved like a bone.
Leading edge to foil.

To reveal where thoughts are
sinking.

A last glimpse,

until
it bores its way out.

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 08/31/08 10:58 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 08/31/08 11:07 AM
above or below the water line
slowly rocking
keeping the sea out
and the passenger within

like your cousin the stave
fruit of the vine ages entombed
becoming an intoxicating draft

flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Sun 08/31/08 11:10 AM
love the analogies in your last poems, very visual:smile: flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 08/31/08 12:01 PM
Thank you

Poetic flowerforyou
s1ow flowerforyou :heart:
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