sponsored links

Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Topic: Is there a way?
carnie Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 245	Wed 08/27/08 06:54 PM
My heart grows cold, The sky turns gray, It seems it every day. A spiral of sin, Making hope thin. Is there a way, Through this dusty haze, Perhaps searching the wrong ways. Wishing to turn back, As the sun turns black. Young voices say hope is near, I do not fear, As I pray the light draws near, And so I cry, For hope is here.

SweetButSpoiled Joined Fri 07/13/07 Posts: 364	Wed 08/27/08 06:58 PM
Very good!

carnie Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 245	Wed 08/27/08 06:59 PM
thanks this is my first.

SweetButSpoiled Joined Fri 07/13/07 Posts: 364	Wed 08/27/08 07:04 PM
I am usually not one for the writing posts, but I pop in and read every now and then. This one hit a few nails for me.

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 08/27/08 07:05 PM
Nice write, carnie

carnie Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 245	Wed 08/27/08 07:08 PM Edited by carnie on Wed 08/27/08 07:09 PM
Thanks everyone very much. And Im glad that it meant something to you.

Community > Poems & Creative Writing