Topic: The Dreamer's Smile
myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 08/24/08 10:20 AM
It starts with a twinkle

a gentle light that beckons in your eye

a silent witness to thoughts

that tempt and tease

and hint at pleasure.

A witty remark is coming,

it revealed itself just then.

Your mouth purses

as if unsure if it can trust

that twinkle

it is wise to your ways

it knows you far too well.

A laugh bursts forth

and the mouth gives a defeated sigh

and smiles, cause it loves to be happy.

Your face changes

like a light switched on

the whole of you

revealed in a flash

that makes watchers gasp

and lean forward

in their seats.

The most amazing part of this

is that I know

that this outer you

is but a small

infinitesimal part

that makes up the whole

of you.

If they only knew

the inner sanctum

the corridors that live

inside your wondrous heart

the glowing center

of your core

that keeps and holds

that infinite spark

that is you.

You amaze me

send me into spirals of awe

at the sweetness that is

the very essence

of who you are.

If they only but knew

what I know.

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 08/24/08 10:25 AM
goodjobflowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 08/24/08 10:29 AM
wow again flowerforyou :heart:

d4tc's photo
Sun 08/24/08 11:33 AM
:heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 08/24/08 12:14 PM
nicely done...

flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 08/24/08 12:38 PM
Thank you

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Jason :heart:
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LAMom's photo
Sun 08/24/08 09:25 PM
Wow Indeed,,, flowerforyou :heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 08/24/08 11:44 PM
Very impressive and impacting. Excellent write. :smile: flowerforyou