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We began so full of hope but time showed us how to shed a great many tears. Our hearts have a few brave moments, but throughout life 1 gigantic fear. Loneliness, only as we approach this opportunity we tell our soul it will be different. She’s pure rhythm to my dancing drum and enticingly working with the right equipment. I’m a spirit misfit seeking for someone who first speaks the truth. Never to clever whatsoever the endeavor just trust, and at dawn you’ll have your proof. We’re now bedazzled, as I wonder the entire day how real all this seems. You and I as one but I’m well known for peddling heartfelt dreams. She shines the light of reason onto my light brown complexion. I try to focus but plummet in quicksand and begin spiraling in a downward direction. Insatiably she waves her black skirt as the last thing I would see. I'm covered from head to toe and finding it very hard to breathe. So tough to listen whilst Angels speak as Sin shouts what you wish to hear. Convincing our minds relationships without boundaries hold absolutely nothing to fear. As seasons change, colors rearrange suddenly I’m awakened by sister Sunlight’s beams. I have 2 pillows on my bed, both lying under my head again peddling heartfelt dreams. |
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 very nice
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I really liked this one. Good write!
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MirrorMirror & Fadedspirit I thank you both very much for the time and kind words.
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We began so full of hope but time showed us how to shed a great many tears. Our hearts have a few brave moments, but throughout life 1 gigantic fear. Loneliness, only as we approach this opportunity we tell our soul it will be different. She’s pure rhythm to my dancing drum and enticingly working with the right equipment. I’m a spirit misfit seeking for someone who first speaks the truth. Never to clever whatsoever the endeavor just trust, and at dawn you’ll have your proof. We’re now bedazzled, as I wonder the entire day how real all this seems. You and I as one but I’m well known for peddling heartfelt dreams. She shines the light of reason onto my light brown complexion. I try to focus but plummet in quicksand and begin spiraling in a downward direction. Insatiably she waves her black skirt as the last thing I would see. I'm covered from head to toe and finding it very hard to breathe. So tough to listen whilst Angels speak as Sin shouts what you wish to hear. Convincing our minds relationships without boundaries hold absolutely nothing to fear. As seasons change, colors rearrange suddenly I’m awakened by sister Sunlight’s beams. I have 2 pillows on my bed, both lying under my head again peddling heartfelt dreams. Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I just want to hold ya and tell you.. Dreams really do come true,,,
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 LaMom I'm waiting!!!
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Wonderful write
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what a wonderful poem
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Flame1cutie & pkd
 I am truly humbled by your kindness.
Thank you both very much. 
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Excellent.
"Never to clever whatsoever the endeavor just trust, and at dawn you’ll have your proof." Great line.
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Thank you my brother d4tc.
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I enjoyed this, thank you
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Thank you my winged fire breathing beautiful friend Dragoness!
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Great write...thank you
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 NO,no,no, THANK YOU MisKim323
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Really nice, and very cleverly written
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Thank you for the compliment and the laugh with that very funny picture Sir isaac_dede
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Once again you have blessed us with a great write
Peace my brother |
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Right on for the love, peace be with you
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