Topic: Words That Seduce
myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 08/22/08 08:41 PM
The words make me shiver

they travel my spine

and make my voice hitch

and my eyelids fall

that touch smooth touch that lingers

and finds a fold of skin

softness and pressure

the warmth of a palm

laid close to bared skin

despite the passion

I feel a giggle

joy makes my heart laugh

I seek your eye

and find it preoccupied

with other delights

the hands linger overlong

and I am tempted to play seductress

to your well written

symphony and prose

well thought words

as you murmur in my ear

the words that make

me feel beautiful

and wanted.

no photo
Fri 08/22/08 08:46 PM
Now that was ausome!

TwilightsTwin's photo
Fri 08/22/08 09:25 PM
very niceflowerforyou

ChefBadger's photo
Fri 08/22/08 11:31 PM
Your prose is amazing.
That is some serious talent you are wielding.

s1owhand's photo
Fri 08/22/08 11:37 PM
"i like that" bigsmile
devil "that's hot"

d4tc's photo
Sat 08/23/08 02:20 PM
:heart: this one....