Topic: The Slow Raise of the Mourner's Veil | |
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I’m healing
and you’re slipping away. It’s cruel, to force me to choose between keeping you alive and killing myself or letting you die and living. I don’t await your phone calls Saturday with the sunrise in my eyes, I skip songs we sang together in favor of the newer, the less overplayed. The jagged edge of stolen love is stabbing me less frequently about the chest and has reduced itself from an unbearable shredding to a dull, constant ache. And it’s the truth that I think of you several [all] times [the] each [time] day, but your face, a love scar on my psyche, arrives less and less in the company of tears and more with subtle, secret smiles. I’m healing, and you’re slipping away. Your voice barely echoes in that place between sleep and waking, and I don’t chase it. I choose to live. You’d want that. |
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Very, very good writing. Very descriptive and touching.
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Sun 08/17/08 02:04 PM
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(((myanimalc))) it's beautiful
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I’m healing and you’re slipping away. It’s cruel, to force me to choose between keeping you alive and killing myself or letting you die and living. I don’t await your phone calls Saturday with the sunrise in my eyes, I skip songs we sang together in favor of the newer, the less overplayed. The jagged edge of stolen love is stabbing me less frequently about the chest and has reduced itself from an unbearable shredding to a dull, constant ache. And it’s the truth that I think of you several [all] times [the] each [time] day, but your face, a love scar on my psyche, arrives less and less in the company of tears and more with subtle, secret smiles. I’m healing, and you’re slipping away. Your voice barely echoes in that place between sleep and waking, and I don’t chase it. I choose to live. You’d want that. Very touching! |
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Thank you (((SKPCG , s1ow & RJR1 )))
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