Topic: My house (a poem)
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Sat 03/17/07 04:13 PM
My house
I’m building a new house
It will be strong and safe
No Ill wind
Shall blow it down

I’ll use hammers
I’ll use nail
My children are the foundation
My friends are the braces

The windows will sparkle
For the sun to shine threw
The wall will bear witness
To laughter and joy

The fire will burn
On a hearth of stone
Cozy and warm
Safe from the storm

Fresh cut flowers
The pantry is full
Food for the hungry
A bed for the weary

Please come in I’ll say
We ‘ll have tea
Stay for awhile
Lets share a smile

Stay as long as you’d like
Maybe the rest of your life

But if you must go
Give me a hug
A warm embrace
And go in peace

I will miss you
But nay not follow
For I am not allowed
Outside my house

don’t you see
I am a prisoner

I am a prisoner
Locked in my life

My house is empty
Without a wife

CATBW56's photo
Sat 03/17/07 04:19 PM
very nice...brought a tear to my eyesad sad sad

Stephycats's photo
Sat 03/17/07 05:15 PM
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That poem was wonderful. A true work of art. Keep up the good work!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:53 PM
THAT is really good!flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sun 03/18/07 06:13 AM
Very, very good.

venusrose's photo
Sun 03/18/07 06:16 AM
I agree, very good!flowerforyou

ToyotaGirl's photo
Sun 03/18/07 06:18 AM
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Well done. A great read.

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 03/18/07 07:57 AM
Love it, I have felt that way many times. Great readbigsmile

G

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Tue 03/20/07 05:16 PM
thank you all
so very much. It means alot coming from a group
of people such as yourselfs.
thanks agian !

LAMom's photo
Tue 03/20/07 10:04 PM
I Agree, Very,, Very Nice flowerforyou