Topic: Untitled song by me
Joshy44's photo
Fri 03/16/07 09:48 PM
So yeah... I was bored and I write songs, so I just did this in 15
minutes.... feedback would be nice :-)



Life - it's all just a mystery,
But all I see is you and me,
Holding hands staring at the stars,

The stars are there to shine,
I want you to be mine,
Because that's the way it should be,

Going out never looked so good before,
You are the one I most adore,
Kiss your forehead - wanting the best,
Run away to get away from the rest,

You changed your mind about me,
Something that I didn't see,
Coming at me 90 miles an hour,

My feelings are now confused,
Much like your's but you refuse,
To let me know how you truly feel,

Going out never seemed this way before,
You're still the one I adore,
Hold you tightly-never let go,
Lay with me so we get to know

-Eachother.........
-Eachother.........

Now she cries at night,
When she thinks about me-----
Shen knows it isn't rightm
The way she wants it to be------

Going out without her now is head,
(Now she cries at night--------------)
But it's the way she wanted it,
(She knows it isn't right-------------)
Our story is over - how sad
(It'll never end------------)
Over story is gone - never returning.

sorleo's photo
Fri 03/16/07 11:11 PM
awsome piece man i could easily see a band like hinder doing that song
if u want to go that route well written

Joshy44's photo
Sat 03/17/07 03:32 PM
oh wtf, only one person for feedback?

booo!!!!



...but thanks for the feedback, dude. lol