Topic: That Classy Lady
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Wed 08/13/08 10:43 PM
I WOULD LIKE TO TELL ALL THE WORLD.
THAT I,VE MET A CLASSY LADY.
WHO,S MORE THAN JUST A FRIEND TO ME.
SHE,S MY LADY OF SUNSHINE.
I COULD SAY SHE,S MINE.
BUT YOU CAN,T OWN WHAT,S LOVELY&FREE.

SHE,S MY KEY TO INSPIRATION.
SHE,S INEVERYTHING I DO.
SHE KNOWS HOW TO MAKE ME SMILE.
WHEN I,M FELLING BLUE.
WHEN I,M LONELY SHE,S RIGHT BY MY SIDE.
MY LOVE FOR THIS WOMAN I CAN,T SEEM TOO HIDE.

WELL IF I COULD HAVE MY WAY.
AND COULD MAKE HER STAY.
HERE IN MY ARMS FOREVERMORE.
I COULDN,T ASK HER FOR THAT MUCH.
I,M JUST HAPPY I WAS ABLE TO TOUCH HER.
THAT CLASSY LADY WHO BRINGS LOVE TO MY WORLD.

happy

alisha07's photo
Wed 08/13/08 10:43 PM
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Wed 08/13/08 10:48 PM
Good writing...but if I could, just one recommendation really...It's, your's, she's, I've...instead of comma's, cause well honestly this "I,ve; your,s; she,s" hurts my eye's.

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Wed 08/13/08 10:50 PM
I wish I met classy ladies. The only kind I meet are promiscuous disreputable ones...

about that..