Topic: aLL wRONG
d4tc's photo
Tue 08/12/08 02:34 PM
Everything is wrong -
It's all wrong
We should have used -
real dinosaurs
Real entertainment
Not this -
this - this -
this - this -
Thing
You call
Stuff -
This stuff
Its just
Things -
Things made of
Stuff -
Stuff we don't need -
Take clean water
Off the list
of stuff we
don't need
That does not
Belong
These are wants
What we want
always exceeds
The cost
Suckers pay retail for

E
V
I
A
N

because they are

N
A
I
V
E

I would like to be blue
blue man blue
Soften me up
Lighter
Paintless
Painless
Primed
And ready
A hat made of avocados
A teal tuxedo
hiding the orange dorrito
Eating a cheesy speedo

I in her

Her

E
Y
E

Looking at me

My

E
Y
E

Looking at her

Locking down
Cracking knuckles
Moving in
The final sigh
Eye to eye
Ears blossoming
Words meshing
Wringing sponges
Using hands
Arms uncrossed
Making gestures
Head up
Smiling
Caught in the vortex
A zone of no sex
Not feeling it
It being the need
The want is always
The pre-jerk suffice
Lessens the tension
Awaiting
The good night kiss

A better night missed

no photo
Tue 08/12/08 02:37 PM
bigsmile flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Tue 08/12/08 02:43 PM

Everything is wrong -
It's all wrong
We should have used -
real dinosaurs
Real entertainment
Not this -
this - this -
this - this -
Thing
You call
Stuff -
This stuff
Its just
Things -
Things made of
Stuff -
Stuff we don't need -
Take clean water
Off the list
of stuff we
don't need
That does not
Belong
These are wants
What we want
always exceeds
The cost
Suckers pay retail for

E
V
I
A
N

because they are

N
A
I
V
E

I would like to be blue
blue man blue
Soften me up
Lighter
Paintless
Painless
Primed
And ready
A hat made of avocados
A teal tuxedo
hiding the orange dorrito
Eating a cheesy speedo

I in her

Her

E
Y
E

Looking at me

My

E
Y
E

Looking at her

Locking down
Cracking knuckles
Moving in
The final sigh
Eye to eye
Ears blossoming
Words meshing
Wringing sponges
Using hands
Arms uncrossed
Making gestures
Head up
Smiling
Caught in the vortex
A zone of no sex
Not feeling it
It being the need
The want is always
The pre-jerk suffice
Lessens the tension
Awaiting
The good night kiss

A better night missed


enjoyed this tremendously!

myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 08/12/08 02:43 PM
Very nice, J :heart: :heart:

d4tc's photo
Tue 08/12/08 02:56 PM
flowerforyou MsKim
bigsmile Jimz
KAT flowerforyou

Thank you.

I love this poem!!! laugh :heart: laugh :heart:

:wink:

Seriously, I do.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 08/12/08 03:15 PM
Oh alright as long as u love it without the need 2 po-zess it. Can't spell or resist - sorry.