Topic: Proposal
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Tue 08/05/08 06:37 AM
Edited by Cavatica on Tue 08/05/08 06:38 AM
Spill it, spill your guts
Give away your deepest darkest secrets
Lay it all out on the table
Expecting not to be judged nor despised
Bare your soul, whisper of all of your fears
Go back through all of those darkest years
Complete trust given
Asking simply to be loved for who and what you are
All the while you shake in fright
Expecting him to turn and run into the night
Shocked and surprised when he stayed
His soft whispers filling your ear
"It doesn't matter baby, that was then
You and I are now"
His hand holding on to yours so tight
As he gets down on his knee
Asking you to be his wife
"I'm just a simple man, nothing more nothing less
please baby just grant me this one request
Spend your life with me, please baby just say yes
Won't you please baby be my wife"


d4tc's photo
Tue 08/05/08 07:59 AM
Bold and serene. happy drinker Great piece Cavatica.

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Tue 08/05/08 08:23 AM
bigsmile flowerforyou

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Wed 08/06/08 12:41 PM
Thank you

Mystique42's photo
Wed 08/06/08 12:44 PM
drinker flowerforyou :heart: Very good:heart:

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Wed 08/06/08 09:25 PM
What a great poembigsmile flowerforyou flowerforyou