Topic: Venice Beach
d4tc's photo
Mon 08/04/08 08:24 AM
I am in Venice

All the bums here
need a dentist

ASAP

A sap
Some sap
just asked me to spare change

I could barely spare
Who - I - Am
As - I - Am

if that seems strange

Why would I give change?

I just want to be the same
Man under the sun in the sand
Solid and chained to happiness

Please don't tell me I can't drink
red wine with fish

I know white compliments the fish

But I'm red meat
Red drink
Compliments me

I don't want to be any different
Than this
I don't want to get livid
I don't want to put on the ritz
Whence

I've found articoke crust pizza
Adds a nice twist
And now I listen to the wind wisk
Bar none
Far from home

Watching street show freaks
Roam

In this interesting
place they call home

Relaxing her in Venice

Talking with the
beggars and
Out of ocean
surf bums

Watching birds
chirp feathers
flocking over
tourist crumbs

bluesunflower's photo
Mon 08/04/08 08:26 AM
good write. i dig it. drinker

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Mon 08/04/08 08:28 AM
That was nothing short of an AWESOME piece!!! Thanks!!!!! flowerforyou :banana:

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/04/08 08:30 AM
Thank You
SKPCG flowerforyou
bluesunflower flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Mon 08/04/08 09:22 AM
bigsmile takes me back

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/04/08 09:38 AM
Very nice! :heart: flowerforyou

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Mon 08/04/08 10:50 AM
drinker :smile: drinkerAnother great write my friend.Your style is very unique and enjoyed by so many of your fellow writers.Godspeed!Cy :=)

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Mon 08/04/08 02:13 PM
great write Jdrinker drinker