Topic: Tranquilized
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Sun 08/03/08 01:58 AM
Ripped away from my soul
Torn free from my mind
Scattered and dancing on the wind
Thoughts endless thoughts parading in and out
Up and down, back and forth
Crippled by the loss
And yet and yet...it carries on
On and on, as if it never was
As if it never existed in this realm
There is no light, there is no darkness
Just these confusing shades of gray
Nothing able to hold the inner demons at bay
Screaming a soundless scream and it reaches no ears
As I stand alone in the shades of gray
Waiting ever waiting for another day
Passing on and on in an endless stream
Day comes day goes and I cannot seem to find the peace
Another piece falls to the ground
My screams make no sound.....

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Sun 08/03/08 02:05 AM
drinker drinker !! pretty ! damn ! good !! I liked it !!

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Sun 08/03/08 02:28 AM
a gust blows past
saw it but it's quiet now
was i still dreaming

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Sun 08/03/08 11:30 AM
Well written!

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Sun 08/03/08 03:05 PM
very niceflowerforyou flowerforyou