Topic: Sheets
myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:31 PM
We swim under a crimson sea of sheets
and dream in tidal waves of lustful surge,
tread waters, soft and gentle, then repeat,
dive down in hungry pools where we submerge.This bed, an ocean where we set our sails
and where the stars and moon provide us light.
This place in which I memorize details,
my lover’s shadow in the grasp of night.

Our bodies twist, a compass of the skin.
Thirsty, sweating, panting, undeterred.
I feel the crest and sink inside our sin.
Our weightless passion floats on undisturbed.

We drift on open sea and fight for air.
Emerge from underwater, wet and bare.

justwantlove87's photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:31 PM
you are really thinken tonight! wow keep em commen

justwantlove87's photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:32 PM
A poem is the true life of a person and their views...

no photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:33 PM
you write with deepness and true feeling. wow.
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wzrunner's photo
Sat 08/02/08 08:34 PM
Your poems truly paint pictures. These poems are fantastic!flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 08/02/08 10:39 PM
Great writeflowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 08/03/08 02:52 AM
:heart: Exquisite :heart:

(((myanimalc)))


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Sun 08/03/08 03:45 PM
"I feel the crest and sink inside our sin"
loved this line-great writing as always.flowerforyou flowerforyou