Topic: to perceive and conceive
PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 07/29/08 02:45 PM
like a bullet shot in a crowd—

i am neutral
indiscriminate energy
energy of unconditional love
without wayward bounds
contrived constrictions
nor distorted dreams

as semen to fertile egg—

i am creativity
immutable intent
on the boundless breeze
of unknowable mysteries
fusible fabric interwoven
within every exhaled
or inhaled breath
of creation

like a buffalo in a bow’s sight—

i am a willing prisoner
of flesh and bone
held captive carelessly
by a catcalling conscious
subconscious submissions
and external scepters

like a vortex of nothingness—

i exist to perceive and conceive

AtariBaby's photo
Tue 07/29/08 02:58 PM
Your choice of words is supreme. Your username suits you!!:thumbsup:

myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 07/29/08 04:04 PM

Your choice of words is supreme. Your username suits you!!:thumbsup:


I agree completely. Very nice flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 07/29/08 04:38 PM
Thought provoking...flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/29/08 09:55 PM

like a bullet shot in a crowd—

i am neutral
indiscriminate energy
energy of unconditional love
without wayward bounds
contrived constrictions
nor distorted dreams

as semen to fertile egg—

i am creativity
immutable intent
on the boundless breeze
of unknowable mysteries
fusible fabric interwoven
within every exhaled
or inhaled breath
of creation

like a buffalo in a bow’s sight—

i am a willing prisoner
of flesh and bone
held captive carelessly
by a catcalling conscious
subconscious submissions
and external scepters

like a vortex of nothingness—

i exist to perceive and conceive



Brilliant display of the you flowerforyou

Amathyst2's photo
Tue 07/29/08 10:05 PM
Very nice. I love it when poetry stimulates my mental and emotional imagery.

flame1cutie's photo
Tue 07/29/08 10:16 PM
Very excellent write:smile: flowers flowers

PoeticMaster's photo
Tue 07/29/08 11:26 PM


Your choice of words is supreme. Your username suits you!!:thumbsup:


I agree completely. Very nice flowerforyou


blushing thnk you very much atari and animal drinks flowerforyou

angel, LA, Amathyst2, and flame thank you for the read and comment happy flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Wed 07/30/08 04:48 PM

Your choice of words is supreme. Your username suits you!!:thumbsup:


i couldn't agree more :wink: flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/31/08 12:53 AM
Brilliant. drinker

no photo
Thu 07/31/08 06:35 AM
great words, great poem:smile: :smile: