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Topic: Smoke
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Tue 07/29/08 12:02 AM
i see your face in opaque, wintery, misty rolls that puff up and unfold from down below the haze unfurls swirls and rises smooth trimmed precisely so eyes aglow you approach me slow with that fading amber glare the smoke is drawn towards me and this is so much so that while you are away i do not feel alone

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 07/29/08 12:54 AM
So much to say about smoke in so little to say. Amazing!

PoeticMaster Joined Fri 07/18/08 Posts: 411	Tue 07/29/08 01:29 AM
sweet!

AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Tue 07/29/08 06:42 AM
Beautiful

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 07/29/08 06:46 AM
very nice

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Tue 07/29/08 07:39 AM


myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Tue 07/29/08 08:53 AM
Thank you (((Jason, Poetic, Atari, pkd, Harold)))

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