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Topic: Cold winter air
AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Mon 07/28/08 05:11 PM
My last happy memory was walking, walking up eight concrete steps and breathing the cold winter air. Life created, life lost, bitter tongues, sweet caress. Non forgiveness of thy self, the hero a coward and pain the cure. Honest offerings turn deceitful at night, Closure brings forth a welcomed openess. A deathly silence heard by all, Who will ignore and who will answer. My last happy memory was walking, walking up eight concrete steps and breathing the cold winter air.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 07/29/08 12:01 AM
I answer, nice write!

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Tue 07/29/08 12:01 AM


myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Tue 07/29/08 12:03 AM
Very nice, Atari

AtariBaby Joined Thu 07/17/08 Posts: 1497	Tue 07/29/08 06:22 AM
Thank you all very much!!

anonymous326 Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 1346	Tue 07/29/08 01:06 PM
nice job buddy

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