Topic: Cold winter air
AtariBaby's photo
Mon 07/28/08 05:11 PM
My last happy memory was walking,
walking up eight concrete steps and
breathing the cold winter air.
Life created, life lost,
bitter tongues, sweet caress.
Non forgiveness of thy self,
the hero a coward and pain the cure.
Honest offerings turn deceitful at night,
Closure brings forth a welcomed openess.
A deathly silence heard by all,
Who will ignore and who will answer.
My last happy memory was walking,
walking up eight concrete steps and
breathing the cold winter air.



d4tc's photo
Tue 07/29/08 12:01 AM
I answer, nice write! :wink: drinker

msmyka's photo
Tue 07/29/08 12:01 AM
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myanimalcracker's photo
Tue 07/29/08 12:03 AM
Very nice, Atari flowerforyou flowerforyou

AtariBaby's photo
Tue 07/29/08 06:22 AM
Thank you all very much!!

flowerforyou

anonymous326's photo
Tue 07/29/08 01:06 PM
nice job buddy:thumbsup: