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d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 07/27/08 11:31 PM Edited by d4tc on Sun 07/27/08 11:43 PM
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myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Sun 07/27/08 11:34 PM


d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 07/27/08 11:37 PM
~Multiple Choice~ Do you want hear; A) Yesterdays Good Morning B) Todays Good Morning C) Tomorrows Good Morning D) All of the above (Same voice. Same words. Same tone.) GOOD ~ NIGHT!

iRon Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 2786	Sun 07/27/08 11:38 PM
So how was everything at first?

howlandp Joined Thu 12/13/07 Posts: 147	Sun 07/27/08 11:38 PM
best online poem ever. It would be better without the explanation in parentheses though; if they don't get it an explanation won't help.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 07/27/08 11:43 PM
LOL! iRon best online poem ever. It would be better without the explanation in parentheses though; if they don't get it an explanation won't help. Wow! Thanks Man! I agree. I didn't want to add that line. And you are right. It does sound better without it. the finishing line: (killed by monotony) has been removed Thanks for all the replies.

Peccy Joined Thu 06/28/07 Posts: 17181	Sun 07/27/08 11:45 PM
So how was everything at first? Oh I know this one! Joyous in a second kinna way?

OrangeCat Joined Tue 10/23/07 Posts: 76874	Sun 07/27/08 11:46 PM


s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 07/27/08 11:49 PM
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OrangeCat Joined Tue 10/23/07 Posts: 76874	Sun 07/27/08 11:50 PM
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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 07/27/08 11:52 PM
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iRon Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 2786	Mon 07/28/08 12:02 AM Edited by iRon on Mon 07/28/08 12:03 AM
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d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 07/28/08 12:15 AM
Then one day she changed She got tired of the kisses She pushed me away She stopped bringing me dinner She stopped cooking me dinner She stopped picking us up dinner She stopped caring about her looks She stopped caring about my looks She stopped everything she started to like She stopped! She dropped She rolled over And landed on another man And I I I I I Never knew the meaning of monotony until she wanted to feel the newness of it all over again With Another man

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 07/28/08 12:17 AM
Then one day she changed She got tired of the kisses She pushed me away She stopped bringing me dinner She stopped cooking me dinner She stopped picking us up dinner She stopped caring about her looks She stopped caring about my looks She stopped everything she started to like She stopped! She dropped She rolled over And landed on another man And I I I I I Never knew the meaning of monotony until she wanted to feel the newness of it all over again With Another man

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/28/08 12:18 AM
i didn't see it coming!!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 07/28/08 12:18 AM
Now I will continue to ask why. I will always ask why. I will never understand why. Or how long. How long does it take to get bored with someone. How long does it take before someone says... something... Oh look at how the young love bird never quarrel over dinner The chit chat with smiles and laughs as if this is something new While the commited troopers spend more time staring at their foods looking for loose hairs to nitpick over

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Mon 07/28/08 12:20 AM
Now I will continue to ask why. I will always ask why. I will never understand why. Or how long. How long does it take to get bored with someone. How long does it take before someone says... something... Oh look at how the young love bird never quarrel over dinner The chit chat with smiles and laughs as if this is something new While the commited troopers spend more time staring at their foods looking for loose hairs to nitpick over Boredom only happens if you let it... And sadly, people let it...

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Mon 07/28/08 12:34 AM
and sometimes... there is no point there is no cogent question only unseen trauma accidental unscripted the illness the tragedy unexpected reaction uncontrollable emotions fear anxiety terror flight within and without you have no ticket to ride even though it's no one's fault the plates slide continental rift gulps home land subductively no solace even then

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 07/28/08 08:44 AM
and sometimes... there is no point there is no cogent question only unseen trauma accidental unscripted the illness the tragedy unexpected reaction uncontrollable emotions fear anxiety terror flight within and without you have no ticket to ride even though it's no one's fault the plates slide continental rift gulps home land subductively no solace even then "it's no one's fault the plates slide continental rift"- loved it

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 07/28/08 08:46 AM
Then one day she changed She got tired of the kisses She pushed me away She stopped bringing me dinner She stopped cooking me dinner She stopped picking us up dinner She stopped caring about her looks She stopped caring about my looks She stopped everything she started to like She stopped! She dropped She rolled over And landed on another man And I I I I I Never knew the meaning of monotony until she wanted to feel the newness of it all over again With Another man powerful write stop, start, starting, stalled, start again