Topic: bloom of promise
PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:43 AM
haply God's riddled it --
in the dictionaries of me --
therefore you released I, and you,
in the rivers of the darkest night,
secreted sacred knowledge of me
and of poets, words that pierced my armor

parts of me, live in you --
out connection invisible --
that release the levee of I,
and I, acquire frothed droplets of you.
insights of thee, only I see dawn
break feelings reflected through me,
of me, bond so strong, thine undetectable,
and you too, live within me.

bless our park, the bounty cast skyward --

it may not be beloved of gods and heroes --
whilst thine eye on that which writers use
and muse, so foreign once,
and sighs that dart off thee mirror pure
with every sound and all your sweet.
and to the ghost I go through portals of beauty --
and that love of swings and carousels --
i feel that which you, woman-savior, laid the Sun
as it breaks below my mind most complete,
though thou art we affect each one knows.--

that love, of hills and valleys --
engulfing thee and i fully, separate
from the rest of the world,
encasing us warmly.
often, i ponder, is our bond
felt by others, have they
found love, as i have in thee?
that sacred, ancientness of feeling,
that has opened itself to you and I --

an arm beneath a dream of tresses --
dressed in golden maiden adventures
where your scent, the bloom of promise,
lingers in the bosom of earthy eternity.

lgo's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:49 AM
flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/27/08 12:57 AM

haply God's riddled it --
in the dictionaries of me --
therefore you released I, and you,
in the rivers of the darkest night,
secreted sacred knowledge of me
and of poets, words that pierced my armor

parts of me, live in you --
out connection invisible --
that release the levee of I,
and I, acquire frothed droplets of you.
insights of thee, only I see dawn
break feelings reflected through me,
of me, bond so strong, thine undetectable,
and you too, live within me.

bless our park, the bounty cast skyward --

it may not be beloved of gods and heroes --
whilst thine eye on that which writers use
and muse, so foreign once,
and sighs that dart off thee mirror pure
with every sound and all your sweet.
and to the ghost I go through portals of beauty --
and that love of swings and carousels --
i feel that which you, woman-savior, laid the Sun
as it breaks below my mind most complete,
though thou art we affect each one knows.--

that love, of hills and valleys --
engulfing thee and i fully, separate
from the rest of the world,
encasing us warmly.
often, i ponder, is our bond
felt by others, have they
found love, as i have in thee?
that sacred, ancientness of feeling,
that has opened itself to you and I --

an arm beneath a dream of tresses --
dressed in golden maiden adventures
where your scent, the bloom of promise,
lingers in the bosom of earthy eternity.



I shall leave you flowerforyou smooched cause at this very moment I just want to bask in the glory of your soul,,,

Simply Beautiful

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:09 AM


I shall leave you flowerforyou smooched cause at this very moment I just want to bask in the glory of your soul,,,

Simply Beautiful


blushing awww La, that truly is about as nice a thing anyone can say to another. happy thank you smooched

d4tc's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:13 AM
Good Write! drinker Well done. happy

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:28 AM

Good Write! drinker Well done. happy


bigsmile gracias!

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 07/27/08 05:30 AM
I do so enjoy your writtingsflowerforyou flowerforyou drinker

PoeticMaster's photo
Sun 07/27/08 09:37 AM

I do so enjoy your writtingsflowerforyou flowerforyou drinker


why thank you flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 07/27/08 09:46 AM
drinker Good words man..:smile: