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Topic: Once upon a time........
laidroccordial Joined Sun 12/30/07 Posts: 568	Fri 07/25/08 08:22 PM
its over so Timpoltin thought, but he travelled further to seek the Wizard as he journeyed, he ran into an elven soldier. his name was armaless...(sorry i am not very original...)and asked for him to join him on his journey.

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:26 PM
The hobbit thought about it as he looked at the very tall green skinned elf for a moment.

Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Fri 07/25/08 08:28 PM
Then one day a Bobbit came by and said,... "Hi, my name's Lorena"

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/25/08 08:29 PM
Then one day a Bobbit came by and said,... "Hi, my name's Lorena" Dum, Dum, Dum Sorry,, Couldn't resist

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 08:29 PM
The End This is so funny

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:31 PM
yes it was! Shortest children story ever told!

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:32 PM
Then one day a Bobbit came by and said,... "Hi, my name's Lorena" Timpoltin nods his head allows the elvin soldier to tag along before looking at the bobbit!

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 08:35 PM
This story reminds me when I was 7 years old and the teacher asked me to tell a story I said....there was a kid with a black shirt and another with a blue one. So everybody was waiting for the rest of the story...waiting patienly after 20 minutes my teacher said....wow have a seat now.

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:38 PM
This story reminds me when I was 7 years old and the teacher asked me to tell a story I said....there was a kid with a black shirt and another with a blue one. So everybody was waiting for the rest of the story...waiting patienly after 20 minutes my teacher said....wow have a seat now.

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 08:49 PM
Why you do not try once more to create the story

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:50 PM
Why you do not try once more to create the story asking my little red headed hobbit if that is a good idea!

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 08:52 PM
Why you do not try once more to create the story asking my little red headed hobbit if that is a good idea! hahha that sounds kreeppyyy

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 08:55 PM
It is funny that you say that. Beatrix Potter is probably one of the highest selling children author's the world has ever witnessed. She sold well over 80 million copies of her books in the 1900s. What was funny is she also illustrated her characters and talked to them. She actually believed they were real! So that tells you if you are dedicated in your creations you can actually make them believable! So my red headed hobbit greets you! His name is Billibon Strudeln!

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 09:00 PM
i should start going .....

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Fri 07/25/08 09:02 PM
Have a wonderful evening and sorry to scare you off. All the best

YamilethJ Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 463	Fri 07/25/08 09:19 PM
You are cute.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/25/08 09:26 PM
As the Curtains close the Crowdddddddddddddd (( yes it's huge)) cheersssssssssss Bravoooooooooooooooooooooo Bravooooooooooo Awaiting more from the Whispers of the Hobbit