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Topic: Luminescense of Camp
Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:13 AM



Luminescence Of Camp

Dusk settles upon camp
And the bugs are coming out biting,
It's time to start cooking
So the wood, I start lighting.
The moon is out and full
Dancing among the clouds,
The peace and serenity
Away from the noisy crowds.

Hearing the sounds of night
With the locusts chirping,
My youngest daughter is cute
Sitting over there burping.
The crackling of the fire
As the wood, burns and pops,
I wished this peacefulness
Didn't come to a stop.

The moon now is nigh
The clouds, etched in white,
Watching the hours roll by
On a beautiful night.
It's time to go lay down
For my peaceful nap,
Fluffing up my bed space
Now, I take off my cap.

starlynsangel's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:14 AM
flowerforyou

Redsoxfan1's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:14 AM
Very nice write, (((Robert)))!! I like this one!!:heart:

somewhatshy2's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:15 AM
flowerforyou nice

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:18 AM

Thank you ladies, I tried to make it feel like you were there.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:25 AM
And whilst I was sleeping.
Came a silly ole' bear.
While trying to get at some food.
Got her head stuck in some underware.
I woke up to laughter.
From my daughter it seems.
Saw the bear and realized,
It was'nt a dream.
Scared the bear off with a loud scream.
My daughter said but Dad, perhaps she was'nt mean.

:wink: laugh


Really enjoyed your poem {{{Robert}}}
flowers biggrin flowers
Sorry I just had to add to it! :angel:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:27 AM

And whilst I was sleeping.
Came a silly ole' bear.
While trying to get at some food.
Got her head stuck in some underware.
I woke up to laughter.
From my daughter it seems.
Saw the bear and realized,
It was'nt a dream.
Scared the bear off with a loud scream.
My daughter said but Dad, perhaps she was'nt mean.

:wink: laugh


Really enjoyed your poem {{{Robert}}}
flowers biggrin flowers
Sorry I just had to add to it! :angel:


I loved it Susan...that was really cute. And thanks.

d4tc's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:37 AM
Nice Writes Wolf and MsTeddy drinker flowerforyou

Silkbutterfli's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:44 AM
That was nice, made me wish was out in the woods camping, and I don't camp

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:46 AM

That was nice, made me wish was out in the woods camping, and I don't camp


You would love it my dear. And thanks.

Sweet_and_Sassy's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:58 PM
Peacefullness doesn't have to come to a stop...hold on to that feeling.

Wonderful words....as usualflowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 03:01 PM

Peacefullness doesn't have to come to a stop...hold on to that feeling.

Wonderful words....as usualflowerforyou


Thank you my dear...coming from you makes that peacefulness lasts.

Britty's photo
Sun 07/20/08 06:39 PM


nice write, made me smile.

loved MsTeddys addition too. laugh

flowers flowers

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 07/20/08 08:33 PM
The only thing missing was the stream that you could dip your feet in.

laugh :wink:

G

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/20/08 08:57 PM
love, love so love this,,,

((( Robert & Ms Teddy ))))

flowerforyou :heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:40 PM
Thanks Susan...yes, Susan's add was a good one too and she can add anytime she feels it. Thanks for your wonderful comment.

Craig, there wasn't a stream, but the lake was there. Hope you and Kim are doing great.

Dee, I am so glad you liked this. I hope we made it to where you felt like you were there.

AngelLight's photo
Mon 07/21/08 02:02 AM
A very sweet poem....flowerforyou

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 07/21/08 06:15 AM


Craig, there wasn't a stream, but the lake was there. Hope you and Kim are doing great.



A Lake? Somewhere I can go soak my head? I'll be right there........

:banana: :banana: noway laugh slaphead

And yes we are doing just great.

G

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 07/21/08 08:02 AM

A very sweet poem....flowerforyou


Thank you Angel my dear. As you are as well.

Puffins1958's photo
Mon 07/21/08 08:54 AM
very cute
definately needed a stream
rocking chairs.....
BIG sigh

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