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Luminescence Of Camp Dusk settles upon camp And the bugs are coming out biting, It's time to start cooking So the wood, I start lighting. The moon is out and full Dancing among the clouds, The peace and serenity Away from the noisy crowds. Hearing the sounds of night With the locusts chirping, My youngest daughter is cute Sitting over there burping. The crackling of the fire As the wood, burns and pops, I wished this peacefulness Didn't come to a stop. The moon now is nigh The clouds, etched in white, Watching the hours roll by On a beautiful night. It's time to go lay down For my peaceful nap, Fluffing up my bed space Now, I take off my cap. |
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Very nice write, (((Robert)))!! I like this one!!
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nice
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Thank you ladies, I tried to make it feel like you were there. |
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And whilst I was sleeping.
Came a silly ole' bear. While trying to get at some food. Got her head stuck in some underware. I woke up to laughter. From my daughter it seems. Saw the bear and realized, It was'nt a dream. Scared the bear off with a loud scream. My daughter said but Dad, perhaps she was'nt mean. Really enjoyed your poem {{{Robert}}} Sorry I just had to add to it! |
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And whilst I was sleeping. Came a silly ole' bear. While trying to get at some food. Got her head stuck in some underware. I woke up to laughter. From my daughter it seems. Saw the bear and realized, It was'nt a dream. Scared the bear off with a loud scream. My daughter said but Dad, perhaps she was'nt mean. Really enjoyed your poem {{{Robert}}} Sorry I just had to add to it! I loved it Susan...that was really cute. And thanks. |
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Nice Writes Wolf and MsTeddy
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That was nice, made me wish was out in the woods camping, and I don't camp
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That was nice, made me wish was out in the woods camping, and I don't camp You would love it my dear. And thanks. |
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Peacefullness doesn't have to come to a stop...hold on to that feeling.
Wonderful words....as usual |
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Peacefullness doesn't have to come to a stop...hold on to that feeling. Wonderful words....as usual Thank you my dear...coming from you makes that peacefulness lasts. |
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nice write, made me smile. loved MsTeddys addition too. |
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The only thing missing was the stream that you could dip your feet in.
G |
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love, love so love this,,,
((( Robert & Ms Teddy )))) |
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Thanks Susan...yes, Susan's add was a good one too and she can add anytime she feels it. Thanks for your wonderful comment.
Craig, there wasn't a stream, but the lake was there. Hope you and Kim are doing great. Dee, I am so glad you liked this. I hope we made it to where you felt like you were there. |
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A very sweet poem....
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Craig, there wasn't a stream, but the lake was there. Hope you and Kim are doing great. A Lake? Somewhere I can go soak my head? I'll be right there........ And yes we are doing just great. G |
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A very sweet poem.... Thank you Angel my dear. As you are as well. |
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very cute
definately needed a stream rocking chairs..... BIG sigh |
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