Topic: The Journey Of A Fairy
Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:10 AM


This is a poem of a childrens story I have written, in which I condensed into poetic form.



The Journey Of The Fairy

She floats like a butterfly
Not in a straight path,
A fairy without direction
You do the math.
She flies through a window
Bumping her head,
Crashing upon a little girl
Who was crying with dread.

A little girl named Hannah
Crying and upset,
The little fairy asked her
"Why in such a fret?"
"The kids next door are partying
And I wasn't invited,
If only they had asked
I would have been delighted."

"Sounds like you need a friend
My name is Teek,
I may be the special friend
In which you seek."
"Yes, I could use a special friend,"
As Hannah wiped her eyes,
"I don't need friends like them
Who ignore and despise."

"I can give you something unique
With three special wishes,
But you can't wish for friends
And you can't wish for riches."
"There is a stipulation though
You have a complete day for all three,
Let me warn you now
Wishing for friends, will get rid of me."

Hannah thought long and hard
For wish number one,
When she said, "I've got it,
Let's see if it can be done."
"I wish you to fly normal
Like that of an arrow,
Not like a butterfly
But straight and narrow."

"An unselfish wish
I'm sure I can grant it,"
So with a sprinkle of dust
And a little enchantment.
"Ok now, we have to wait
So onto wish number two,
We don't have much time
These wishes for you."

Hours passed by, before she thought
What her wish could be,
"I want a boyfriend for mama
And a father for me."
"Another unselfish wish
Let's see what I can do,
A unique wish should happen
For her and you."

As time goes by
Hannah notices wish number one,
Teek shot straight as an arrow
Landing on Hannah's thumb.
"Teek, did you just notice?"
As Hannah excitedly asked,
"You flew straight as an arrow
Now, if it'll last."

"What about my second wish?"
Hannah asked with concern,
"That'll come in due time,
In which you'll learn.
"We have to worry now
Time for wish number three,
Time is closing in
Or you'll wind up losing me."

Two hours, time is running out
Hannah is thinking hard,
Teek is sitting atop a jewelry box
Like waiting on guard.
"I've got it," As Hannah shrieked,
Startling her fairy friend,
"I've got my last wish."
As time was nearing end.

"I've always wanted a puppy
Something furry and cute,
Mama said I could have one
She wouldn't fuss or repute."
"As long as she doesn't mind,"
Teek said, straightening her wings,
"Nothing in the wish contract
Says anthing about furry things."

With a sprinkle of dust
And a few magic words,
To the little chant
That sounds so absurd.
"Your wish will be granted
Let's just wait and see,
But for now, my friend
You have got me."

Redsoxfan1's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:18 AM
Very nice, (((Robert)))!! I love both the story, and this poem!! Great job!!:heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:19 AM
flowers biggrin flowers
{{{Robert}}}

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:19 AM

Very nice, (((Robert)))!! I love both the story, and this poem!! Great job!!:heart:


Thanks Erica...it was just something that came to my head camping this weekend.

Silkbutterfli's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:44 AM
That was cute

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:46 AM

That was cute


Thank you sweetheart, I figured I would get your approval.

stardust50's photo
Sun 07/20/08 12:06 PM
From Tink to you a big smooched

Sweet_and_Sassy's photo
Sun 07/20/08 02:56 PM
That was wonderful Robert

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 03:03 PM

That was wonderful Robert


Thanks sweetheart, I'm glad you liked it. Maybe you could read it to your little one.


Thanks stardust...glad you liked it.

no photo
Sun 07/20/08 05:19 PM
Oh how sweet!
Wonderful, wonderful, write!
Thanks for smile it brought today!
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

writteninstone's photo
Sun 07/20/08 05:22 PM
the sweetest today

TABflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/20/08 09:35 PM
flowerforyou :heart: Robert :heart: flowerforyou

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Sun 07/20/08 11:22 PM
flowerforyou

Dopey180's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:34 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou Wonderful loved it dearly great write

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 07/20/08 11:36 PM
Thanks cm, glad it put a smile on your face today...thanks very much for the comment.

Tabby, glad you liked it as well.

Love always from you Dee.

Amanda, thanks my dear

Dopey...glad you liked it.

AngelLight's photo
Mon 07/21/08 02:07 AM
Great idea Robert...the story then a poem....flowerforyou flowerforyou

(an extra flower because u send the story to me in a format i could read so i didn't miss out!! :laughing: :wink: flowers )

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 07/21/08 08:05 AM

Great idea Robert...the story then a poem....flowerforyou flowerforyou

(an extra flower because u send the story to me in a format i could read so i didn't miss out!! :laughing: :wink: flowers )


You know I will do anything to help you out sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed this rendition as well. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou Flowers for you for being you.

Puffins1958's photo
Mon 07/21/08 08:46 AM
Edited by Puffins1958 on Mon 07/21/08 08:46 AM
............all we need is friends

:heart::heart::heart: flowers flowers

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 07/21/08 11:41 AM

............all we need is friends

:heart::heart::heart: flowers flowers


You're so right...you being the one who has always been there for me. Thanks for being the friend you are.

Sweet_and_Sassy's photo
Wed 07/23/08 10:50 AM


That was wonderful Robert


Thanks sweetheart, I'm glad you liked it. Maybe you could read it to your little one.


Thanks stardust...glad you liked it.


I did and she loved it!