Topic: cycle
DirkGently's photo
Sat 07/19/08 07:18 PM
call me to you side
and i shall glide to you
through the thickening summer air
the wind that blows through your hair
keeps me aloft and light
as day turns into night
and sun to dark i will revel in the starkness
of this time, i hear my heartbeats climb
as i look into your face
i may have lost my place , so stricken by the glow
so much i should show, but maybe in a while
you'll undress me with a smile
and we'll push the world aside
and take a little ride into the center of our hearts
and leave these barren parts behind
and when we are complete
in the throes of sweet defeat
i'll hold you oh so tight
as day chases the night away
and the cycle starts again

writteninstone's photo
Sat 07/19/08 09:42 PM
You touch my heart.. differently I enjoy your poems, but this one made me feel better tonight.
Thanks..

TAB:heart: smooched

writteninstone's photo
Sat 07/19/08 09:42 PM
Edited by writteninstone on Sat 07/19/08 09:43 PM

DirkGently's photo
Sun 07/20/08 06:15 AM
thank you for the compliments, tab. i truly never know what's going to come out when i start these...

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 07/20/08 06:22 AM
:smile: flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 07/20/08 09:07 AM
Very good write Dirk! flowerforyou