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Barely tangible memories
Exasperatingly placed So far apart, Can you fathom this eccentricity? Buffeted by the solace of the singular mind. As my dreams give up and take A different turn, Merely Trundling Motivationally dead, Listless, Pale blues, yellows and greens just hanging about From the backs of chairs, Wisps of their yarn Trailing across the dusted floor. And at the grimy sink, An orange kitten drowns In dishwater stone cold. Fuzzy, bright, warm, playful beauty Drifting in the minor current, Catching shafts of undersea light, Grit, like diamonds, floating sleepily His fur wafts gently side to side, Glassy eyes once filled with light, Now ever open, unseeing. |
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Kind of sad, but an excellent write.
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Kind of sad, but an excellent write. Thank you, Indigo |
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I like the tone.... you expression says a lot about my heart right now...
Thanks for sharing TAB |
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I like the tone.... you expression says a lot about my heart right now... Thanks for sharing TAB Thank you for reading |
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The abstract/metaphoric nature oof the write sets the mood of the loss and the resulting melancholy that you embed within the words scribed nicely conveyed :)
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Sad, but well wrote.
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