Topic: taste my saltine sin
PoeticMaster's photo
Fri 07/18/08 05:56 PM

under ashen-sky
temptation rose
the beastly breeze
of her full glass—

where hurricanes hunt,
no backs get turned,
and the God’s pray for rain—

and she sipped,

tasted saltine sin.

no photo
Fri 07/18/08 05:58 PM
smokin

bastet126's photo
Fri 07/18/08 06:04 PM
ahh...i see you already have :wink: i like, very nice! flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Fri 07/18/08 06:09 PM
thank you bastet, just a quick scribble :)

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 07/19/08 08:57 AM
smokin flowerforyou